(pilot) TOWER

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Description

hi guys a stroke of inspiration hit me one night so i had to write thisthis is just a short story at the moe, that i will develop laterplease fill in the poll after as to what genre it should beanyway a guy can't leave a tower (sad)

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: tarla

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Rating: 2.5/ 5.0
Followers: 3
Views: 2,294

Chapters(2 total)

poll
Oct 3, 2015
ch.1 the tower
Oct 3, 2015

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RznRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
So the idea here is a cross between a fairy tale setting and the idea of a tower. The idea is rough and I doubt this will be picked up again, but it does have a curve to it. The prose is o.k. though there are some issues with the formatting, dialogue and the 'gift' of the witch is a bit overplayed here because it lacks context. This is driven by telling and there is not enough time to become invested in the characters with the style.