Pilgrims of the Dying World

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Once there was a Thief who wished to be a hero. For that, he stole the most important thing in the world. Clad in black amidst the countless stars he was holding a shiny blue sphere.The next second a pale white hand crushed his body and soul, and only a tiny fraction of his True Meaning managed to escape to the Sealed Universe.The Blue Sphere was lost.

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: SWFan

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PrimalShadowRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
As is, reading on will have you experience some rather... unique... English. Some of that is wrong spelling and grammar; some is just genuiniely strange turns of phrase. Here are a few samples from the first two chapters:
> But he didn't fell, for his hand as if glued to the shadow.
> They lurked at shadows, getting closer, and when they got close, there always was only one slash of sabre. After that, well, depends on your luck.
> Wei Xin felt the usual surge of sadness inside, great imagination wasn't helping a bit. What a good time it was! But now, "only ashes remain", as Shan told him with a bitter smile on his face.
> What are Martial Arts? In short: everything, that matters at least. A way to get strong, a hard way, tedious, but passable, but not by everyone.
> He is a hero, future but a grown up already, how can he be so timed before a mere forest?