Philosophy: Unchained

Self-Published

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Description

Reality unfolds when a philosophy teacher drops a pen and it doesn't fall. Can everybody put everything back together before it all falls apart?

(Cowritten by Mr and Mrs Toen)

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2019
Author
Entoen

Royal Road Stats

Rating
2.5/ 5.0
Followers
2
Views
2,769

Chapters(7 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • PsychoRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I am not sure what it all was about, but it was not bad.
    Writing style is interesting and grammar is good.
    Story seem to be partially some kind of satire on PC culture, partially something else.
  • InslayerRoyal Road
    1.0
    This story is so confusing...
    The story progresses more through dialogue and inner monologue than anything else. We do not get any third perspectives, and the already hard to follow story gets even harder.
    The protagonists react to events that they do not seem to understand, trying to show their perspective on things so we would get something from that... only that it doesn't happen.
    This story is so weird and confusing you have to wonder if the author was high when writing it.
    A lot of scenes are hard to follow, but before we can even adapt, the author keeps throwing more to the ever growing pile of LSD material, never letting you adjust, or calm down.
    The story needs to be rewritten.
    I would never recommend someone to read this, unless that someone wants to be recovering from a trauma.
    Edit: I also don't see anywhere a warning for gore, only for profanities.