Phantasmic Light

Self-Published

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Description

The world is corrupt.Nobles and royalty step on the common people.

The common people have no choice but to join the military or live a life of poverty.

The military is brainwashed to only obey orders, even if it's to conquer and pillage innocents.

When living a life of poverty, you're treated as livestock, killed after deemed useless.

When a boy summons the power damned by the gods, will he destroy the entire world like they say?

Or will he end the current regime and bring about a new era of peace?

AN: This is the first time I'm writing a story like this. If you don't mind my poor grammar, weird name choices, and sloppy mistakes feel free to stick around (and correct me please.) Constructive critism is welcome! However please do not just bash my story as I do put a lot of effort into it. I want to make an enjoyable story for myself as well as all of you.

Ps: It's time to come back and rewrite the entire thing, since it kind of went off the rails and then I abandonded it a couple years ago.

Thanks to my friend for drawing the cover art for me.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
Vices

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Rating
4.4/ 5.0
Followers
112
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95,250

Chapters(47 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • AeoniamRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The MC's name is cringy, the fast pace is cringy but smooth, the MC's personality cringily inconsistent at times, although still likeable. All in all, just like my english and grammatical structuring, it's cringy. But it's nice, cringilly so.
    P.S: The grammar is also cringy at times, rarely but it is. Get a proofreader, not really necessary, but it's not really a problem having one. :P