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Teremarae, the final world, is finally ready to accept new inhabitants. Michael, the first resident, is sent here to survive. Armed with a gift and a new body, Michael will have to brave this new world with its different rules.

Will Michael be able to thrive? Or will the nature of Teremarae swallow up Michael whole?

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HakharRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

To start thanks for your effort dear author. Immensely enjoyed the story up the this point and want to see more of it. And to readers checking comments its definetly worth your time. Beatiful worldbuilding, characters, plot all well done it takes you for a ride. Who doesnt like a good evolution story afterall.

Lily Fhon AzhelRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

I'm not good with grammar, so I'll say it as good as I can
I'm not good with reviews, but I'll tell what I find good in the story
First I love the idea and execution. It is genuinely entertaining and the way the idea is executed, it is simple and does well with the plot. The way it also address the changes in ecosystem is a nice detail.
The characters, I'm not an expert by any means, but the characters felt real and easy to relate to, consistent too and likable
The grammar, the grammar is alright and good. I noticed some things in dialogues that they're not as good in grammar and that is a nice detail since most people don't think about grammar when talking their mind. Tho however some parts of the dialouge of the goddess felt redundant for a supposedly higher being, like saying redundant words.
On a note, I'm kinda interested at how the plants and trees will be addressed since there is the evolution thingy and since human intervention allow for stronger evolution, how does it affect the plant life they interact with? Will there be possible carnivorous plant life's? Perhaps some sort of treants?
Also I find the muskat interesting, imagine how successful they will be with how tenacious their population is
And that's all at the moment
Also not trying to jinx it, but hoping this story won't be dropped like the others
I'm totally captured by the beautiful world it is in
Using your descriptions of the world, I imagine pandora while reading every chapter

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