Perfect Avatar

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Supernatural phenomena called Rift have caused the appearance of monsters and other disasters, gradually pushing the world toward its destruction. To face it, some humans having awakened various magical powers are fighting against this apocalypse.

Dora, one of them, has a special "Avatar" class which gives him access to every class, despite great difficulty leveling them up. But even with his enormous potential, he chose to appear incompetent to get kicked from his team, so that he could live a lazy life with his family. Still, his habit of fighting and beating the woman's brother, the strongest in the Kingdom reveals his talents and she decides to enroll him in the royal academy.

Reluctant at first, his mother gives him the motivation he needs to pursue this path, but little did they know what kind of monster they had thrown into the world. Dora is not a hero wishing for peace, but a monster getting addicted to the taste of power, wealth, and freedom.

With the abnormal condition of his soul, he uses a strange system giving him a new vision of the world around him.

Dora pursues an unknown goal until he meets someone who knows more about his true nature than himself and sets him on a path that will nourish his eternal thirst, to the cost of his humanity, but in a world collapsing, isn't a monster the greatest weapon?

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Yalatola

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.6/ 5.0
Followers: 67
Views: 47,086

What readers say about Perfect Avatar

“Good job with characters usage, you know a story is good when you're impatient to see each character in action and remember them. I'm not used to see stories with this deep view. It’s a little messy in the beginning but i don’t regret continuing. Good job a…”
Crimson velvetRoyal Road5.0 / 5
“Took a little time to set off but it's getting interesting it's good that the mc isn't just overpowered from the beginning. but i hope you're not planning to stop the revenge with what the mc did it looks too little for what I expected, counting on you for…”
CrystalRoseRoyal Road5.0 / 5

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Crimson velvetRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Good job with characters usage, you know a story is good when you're impatient to see each character in action and remember them. I'm not used to see stories with this deep view.
It’s a little messy in the beginning but i don’t regret continuing. Good job author
Edit:
RIP Leon
CrystalRoseRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Took a little time to set off but it's getting interesting it's good that the mc isn't just overpowered from the beginning. but i hope you're not planning to stop the revenge with what the mc did it looks too little for what I expected, counting on you for that.
Fashio NistaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Good that the story doesn't just turn around the MC, I'm very interested about how things will go with Hope I wouldn't let him come back if i was the mc
The writing is good, the mc power is original and the power scaling is interesting, he isn't too strong nor too weak.
I'm very interested by the power of his personalities, it's like 2 or 3 mc at once. Sigma is my personal favorite and we still have to see more of gamma, but beta deserves some love 😭
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Magic ojiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
good story overall, it get better as you read and as someone who get easily bored it means a lot. The mc is not your average weak or clumsy one, so if you look for the shonen or even kirito type it's not here. he is morally gray, calculator and would do anything to get what he wants from blackmail to humiliating himself, reminds me a little of Noel from Greatest Clan, but less ruthless
Nostrad ShindaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I'm really invested now, I've never seen a story with such a detailed background, good jobs with characters, intelligent writing, every detail is important and I'm scared of something terrible happening to some of them. I want to read more of this.
Not saying that this is the best serie, but there's something about the dialogue that make them feel really living. The MC isn't the only gray character in my opinion, everyone has a double mentality:
Hope is like Leon, but less clueless, he wants to be a hero but he's comparing himself to Dora who is out of his world, Sana was just an orphan wanting to get out of poverty, Zuri used Dora to get in the forest, Midgard will try to kill Dora? I feel like even Iris doesn't care about people if they aren't strong, and more again
No one is good or bad, for now at least, and even tho I spoiled myself with the technical sheet I'm really enjoying myself here. Dora best MC, Zuri best girl, there's so many things in the background and the lore is getting so interesting.
Big point for making the mc a schizo on drugs, it's funny when you can say at some point that this one is Beta because he's nice or when Midgard recognize Sigma because he insulted her
#teamZuri