Percy Jackson meets Naruto Uzumai
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I don't own Percy Jackson & The Olympians Rick Riordan does and I do not own Naruto Masashi Kishimoto does. But I do own my own Characters.This Stoy is about Percy Jackson and Naruto Uzumaki. Percy and Annabeth are not together. Naruto Uzumaki is being treating bad so the gods sent Percy Jackson to help and he get back he will be turned into a god himself if Naruto come the him will he be turned into a god too? Whats with Sally and Poseidon/Neptune god of the sea and what the big Secret? Where Paul Blofis? will Naruto sill get with Hinata Hyuga will they sill have 2 kids or more. Percy Jackson get with Anko Mitarashi or someone else if someone in mind please tell me. it set after Gaia But after the death 3rd Hokage but before the 4th Great Ninja War. I hope you enjoy it!!!!!
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- Sal198
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 1.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 5
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- 11,155
Chapters(5 total)
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Community Reviews(4)
- Dream45Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0the beginning is all over the place , is actually good if you see it for what it is a a crossover .
- dropatrainRoyal Road★★★ 3.0interesting, the novel could use more work. it is short the chapters. but so far it is an interesting start. though the first 2 chapters are kinda weird. keep pumping out the chapters
- HaywireEagleRoyal Road★ 0.5To be honest. I am not really a fan of the setting to begin with and it doesn't help that the author messes up a character's name right in the title.
Throw in the fact that the chapters are mixed up doesn't help things much.
Now, reading it which I didn't get far before feeling compelled to write the review. I have to say that this is a hard pass. The use of underlining is atrocious and completely unnecessary. The pacing is weak. The structure is poor. and I won't even get started with how choppy it is overall.
It is clear that the author is very young and should practice on the basics before more before working. Though, using fan fiction can be a good way to do that admiteddly. I'd like to request the author gets someone to review their work before posting to help them correct these mistakes and learn from them more. If only to prevent toxic readers from taking offense at the story's content.
That being said, I can't bring myself to even offering a half star for the effort. Doing it only because I have to. Not to be mean or cruel. - yancharRoyal Road★ 0.5seriously... wtf?!!