Path of Fairies (Pokemon OC)

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Description

Alice Blackthorn always loved the stories of her mother's adventures. Stories of far away lands and pokemon she's never heard of. When Alice's mother dies of an illness the only thing left to her is an Igglybuff. When the time comes for Alice to leave on her journey she is barred by the elders of the clan. If a fairy has no place on the team of a dragon trainer then she'll just have to follow a new path. The path her mother once followed. The path of a fairy trainer.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2024
Author
coffeecake57

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREFEMALE LEAD

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Rating
4.7/ 5.0
Followers
73
Views
9,814

Chapters(9 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • InyssaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Though there's only 6 chapters up at the moment of this review, and they're not particularly long chapters, I'm very much enjoying the ride so far. The characterization and the 'feeling' of the story are the best part so far. Alice is compelling as a protagonist and interesting as a trainer, which is all you could ask for in a Pokemon fic.
    The prose serves the story well, though it could do with a tad more editing and switching around some sentences, but it never really got in the way of the story. There's not much to go on yet, but I'm looking forward to what the author will cook up next!
  • SeinexRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    The book suffered from telling not showing. We see their power but were not shown how they got it, given the barest explanation of how they got it and hardly touched on the topic... I also struggle to enjoy the novel as they are just pokemon, not actual characters, given loose reactions with very little personality and relies heavily on people having some idea of the pokemon universe. Honestly it isn't a terrible story but it has a lot of ways in which in can improve. Especially in the depth of your characters and the world around them. I'm not saying it's awful but it needs more work. It lacks a lot and feels very flat and again, I don't think rushing to put her in a strong position the way you did was very smart. You didn't show us, you did a time-skip and the worst part of it was it would've been a great way to world build and develop your characters and not be reliant on ppl rooting for your MC just because they're the MC.