Paragons of the Collective

Self-Published

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Description

In the future, humanity lives within the Collective as they expand their dominance throughout the known universe. Technology has advanced to the point where it operates like the magic of ancient history and species throughout the universe look similar to the monsters that have plagued the human imagination for centuries. All of this is immaterial for John, a young man with an F-ranked Avatar stuck in a system designed to keep him in the dregs of society. In a society where advancement depends upon Contribution Points and those without points are forced to toil in labor for those that do. Follow John in his journey to collect enough Contribution Points to firmly entrench his place in the galaxy as a Paragon of the Collective.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
189
Views
39,376

Chapters(13 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • MythrilRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    You keep writing ill keep reading. So far this story has amazing potential. I greatly enjoyed your world building. I like that it's scifi and litrpg. They're not put together nearly enough imho . Either way good work so far hope to see more.
  • RingostraussRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Fun read so far will give a more in depth review when there are 10 chapters.
    My ratings as always are in comparison to the average story on Royal Road.  This story both starts with a unique setting and a fun hook.  As long as you don't allow your MC's ability to gain power too quickly you will have a fun framework for him developing consistantly.
    You have some minor spelling issues, which using a spell check will probably catch, that said your spelling and grammar are good enough that they did not distract me from the story at all.
    Your characters have some unique voices which distinguish them which is important to good storytelling.
    Overall I'm looking forward to more.  Genre wise feels a tiny bit like The Game but your setting, the balance of power, and the fact that the VR portion is actually an augmented reality overlace is a nice take on the genre.