Panzer Core
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
This is aDungeon Core.
In this story a Scotsman goes on an important life-changing journey, discovering that there are worse things in life than freezing in an Ardennes foxhole while Germans take potshots at you. Before his journey ends and he discovers there are worse things than being kicked into another more unpleasant reality.
Join Craig Lusk as he learns to overcome sobriety and gets a new lease on death.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Author
- Alister
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 81
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Community Reviews(1)
- Lord Of Mild InterestRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0"Lord Mild Interest you can't give a story with 4 chapters 5 stars!"
Well I do what I want mum and will eat my Corn Flakes when I choose to.
Anywho, I love the look of this story. Like fuck me dead this looks like it could be amazing.
I give this man massive props due to the fact that he seems to have made actual interesting and cool lore for his story instead of rinse repeating
"Ahh fuck umm, dude died dungeon core now with goblins... and kings and fuck dude you read a fantasy before you already know"
Instead this story isn't just a cardboard repeat of literally every dungeon story and he has some interesting looking shit he is building up to.
But yeah the fact that in a FANTASY STORY somone decided to do ANYTHING NEW and even try to conceive stuff is a massive achievement in my book.
Dont get me wrong I love seeing everyone's different take on the good ol simple dungeon story but it FEELS SO FUCKING NICE that this story is trying to be more complex then that and make itself unique.
Also the two characters are lovely. It's really enjoyable seeing these two interact, if you can make a page of exposition amusing that's bloody clap worthy in my book. Which this dude did. *clap*
Only proper issue I have is that the prologue was a bit hard to follow and the pixie sometimes is hard to understand but that's half the point of her.
Final thoughts:
-New and refreshing addition to the Dungeon archetype of stories
-Very promising characters
-Interesting ideas
-FUCKING TANKS LADS
I'll make this an actual proper review and less garbage when more content is out for this story, keep up the good work author!
So this ramble fest shit poor excuse of a review is over now. You are free to leave.
*Eats cornflakes*