Pandemonium

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Earth. Once, people thought that earth was the center of the universe. They'll never know how much they were close to the real answer. Set in our times, this tale of mystery and unknown will open your eyes and maybe that maybe, the Pandemonium shall shed a tear for you...

Chapters(111 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • BahubaaliRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I have not written many review so can't garantee it would be a good one but this story not having a review is an injustice to it.
    This novel is seriously great with an antihero male lead that is powerful from the start but not op. He is strong but his enemy are stronger. I just love his personality. Other than that the plot is also good and also foreshadows future event.
    Those of you who have read authors previous work 'Mythical Conquest' can guess MC personality. Also I feel this work is more organised and logical than the previous one and much better.
    At the end I want to say that for those who like antihero MC must give it a try
  • GalacticTNTRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    I was an adamant reader of mythical conquest and now young adversary. You always mentioned how proud you were of pandemonium in those stories but I never actually read it. Well I just started reading it today and I just couldn’t put it down afterwards.
    Both YA and MC have big and expansive worlds but I feel that you put much more Time and effort into this one.
    Congratulations now both you’re stories have pierced my heart. They are both amazing.
    P.s. Though the first dozen chapters could undertake a few grammar checks to actually keep more people’s motivation, there are a lot of grammar nazis out there.
  • ParadoxcloudRoyal Road
    0.5
    The dialogue is incredibly simplistic seemingly coming straight from the mind of the author without revision or editing.
    The very first sentences of the book involve the author dumping information on the reader in the most boring possible way.
    Here's an example
    Spoiler: Spoiler
    Janus, a vast world filled with all kinds of magical places and races. There were elves, goblins, orcs, fairies, giants, dragons, and the list goes on. In this vast and exotic world, all living things had one thing in common.
    They all possess the ability to use the power Anima.
    Anima, the primary source of energy in the world of Janus. It resides in the soul of all living things, and in nature itself. Everyone can use anima, even if they do it subconsciously.
    Being the primary source of energy in the world, Anima is used by everyone to help make their lives easier. For example, anima can be used to power machinery, heal your wounds, and boost your physical strength to make labour easier if even a little bit.
    Of course, like every other power source, anima can be abused and used wrongly. For example, war.