Other World User Of The [system] (Unfinished)

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Status

Hiatus

Author

Geocide

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• darknorth29Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Now this is a fiction written based on the authors wims, and this may be your typical op mc novel but it still enjoyable to the point where it is satisfying to read, you wont get bored especially if you like a fast pace story with no restrictions to your imaginations due to our author being "one of us"  then read this. Enjoy!
• DonutDaddyRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Gonna put this out there now. If ur a person who critiques books then u won't enjoy this. This book is shallow with little description and depth but I believe the author wanted it that way. Because despite that this book is enjoyable and fun to read, for his first fiction he covered all the basics and the most important thing. Which is making the book enjoyable.
• DragonChaosRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  Bear in mind I'm doing this at chapter 4
  first of all, you have done well to differentiate yourself from similar stories as not many that I have read have a system that actually responds to questions. the character personality I quite like since i'm into the "free spirit" personality troupe and as I have said like it a lot.
  however....you're are kinda killing your own potential as a author. Firstly I'm fine with minimal descriptions of places, a sentence is all I(and others) require, for example, you can at least tell the readers what kind of town it is, is it a medieval town, a renaissance style town, or a mid 1700s town where everything is primarily constructed of bricks and mortor. At the moment everything outside a shop or inn is the void in my minds eye.
  Secondly, your grammar does need a bit of work, as writing some1 shows that you're lazy (sorry if I offend you) and so does just writing "u" instead of "you" although I'm fine with things such "u" and non-capitalised "i"s
  now this is where my personal grievances go, for me you have too many stats, as I like to calculate the regen in my head or on a calculator, although it is shown, to me the skills seem a little underwhelming. I would also like a "specialised skills" section for example you have katana and sword mastery( unless of course you are referrring to double edged swords, if so you can completely ignore this point) you could also add skill groups such as the "philanderer" group for skills  like sex and seduction or the "subterfuge" group for things like sneak and lying. And I would much prefer it if you just combined the first 2 chapters into a single one just refer to it as chapter 1
  all in all though it still is a decent read despite it's flaws
  Smooches
  DC
• deideiRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  I don't really agree with most 1 stars...
  1. First of all the MC does struggle, he nearly died in some chapter.
  2. I think that the MC is not a mindless 1 dimensional...he just abuse his power (or try to) ...which is kinda more human than most story out there.
  3. There are some "refreshing" concept that I have not seen in most work, such as runecafting or blessing from high priest to enhance stats of items, etc...
  The story is a bit lacking and I think things go too much in mc favor, I mean he is far from being the strongest out there and yet, he gets away with pretty much anything..., but well w/e... it is still a relatively ok story I guess...
• AKphoxRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  The overall basis has potential. I would flesh out the characters. Maybe take some more time with what he's doing. Also he just breezes through everything. Their is no conflict or struggle. So suspense.
• RoknarRoyal Road

  ★ 1.0

  pretty much a useless waste of time. The plot is ......, the grammar is worse. The main toon is pretty much a narcisstic waste of time. Find a better story to read and there are a lot of them. I find this story to be not ever worth the time to read.
• NirgeRoyal Road

  ★ 1.0

  short chapters, OP'd MC, every character is very shalow, feels like "smart" bots from WOW.
• Talen DrakeRoyal Road

  ★ 0.5

  No descriptions, all tell no show, no plot, no suspense, no conflict.
  Main character has no character.  Just a sequence of wish-fullfillment sequences.  Needs a rape tag.  Recommend banning the author from RRL as this doesn't belong here.
• bradders1504Royal Road

  ★ 0.5

  No plot. Time skips that go by unnoticed. Characters consist of a few lines of dialogue followed by an anime picture at the end of the chapter, getting every anime cliché on the way.
  There are apparently proofreaders, not that you could notice. Grammar is abysmal.
  Overall very low quality work. Sorry for brutal review author, but I'm not one for beating round the bush.
• FOULdragonRoyal Road

  ★ 0.5

  I don't enjoy posting negative reviews for authors because I know the effort it takes to stay dedicated to consistent story progress over time. If there is one thing, however, that will motivate me enough to critique an author so heavily is when the lack of effort is so blatantly obvious it is painful to the eyes.
  The entire story seems to be one massive vicious circle. 1) Main Character feels the need to get stronger. 2) The story builds itself to conveniently throw the necessary tools to get stronger through absolute minimal effort. 3) Rinse and repeat.
  Detail is nonexistent. The most information you are likely to get is the knowledge that something happened. A story is uninteresting to the extreme without detail. Here is an example of some of the bullshit I have read.
  -Bad guy shows up and threatens MC. "I defeat the bad guy with my sword!" The bad guy is defeated! A wild group of bad guys shows up! "I defeat the group of bad guys! Maybe it takes 10 minutes or something!" group of bad guys is defeated!
  That kind of shit is happening all the time and it isn't limited to fights and battles. Conversations sound like to robots smashing each other's faces with wrenches. If the MC needs something the author literally just throws the shit in the MC's lap. no build-up required.
  The most disappointing thing is how the author writes his chapters. they are ABSURDLY short and dialogue is spaced out to increase the amount of space that each chapter takes up to occupy as much space as possible. Looking back at the dates that he posted his chapter I see that he had posted several chapters in the same day and did this several times in a row. This leads me to believe that he used this tactic to maintain his position on royalroadl's front page for now posts. Being on the front page got him plenty of attention and that attention led to more attention. He is taking advantage of a person's curiosity of new experiences to increase his popularity.
  I can honestly say the only entertainm