ORTUM DOMINUS
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Description
What would happen when a weapon engineer gets reincarnated in a magical world?
Brian's life was turned upside down when he died in an accident. To his surprise, he found himself in the body of city lord in a completely different world. A world where magic was not just a fantasy but a reality.In a world where death, political conspiracies, and war was commonplace. will Brian be able to keep himself alive?
This is the story of a lord giving the world of magic a simple taste of the power of science.
There will be lots and lots of ROMANCE AND ACTION so Enjoy :)
(The cover art is from Pinterest.com, it belongs to .i tried to contact you but could not reach you as you were inactive. I have given you credit for the cover art but if you still want me to take it down, do message me.)
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Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Bluestarboy
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 90
- Views
- 7,301
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(7)
- boomchickymayaRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Have only read a few chapters so far--really enjoying it though.
- GunthorpowerRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I Noticed the fiction today and Decided to give it a go. I love the story progression. The 3 chapters so far are really nice.
The best part is While enjoying the story, i will get to learn some chemistry too Lol - avidReader12Royal Road★★★★★ 4.5I want some good romance and action man..Upload more chapters i will wait :)
- Gregory TereszczykRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5I really like how story is progressing. My only complaint is that the chapters are short. I understand that school and life takes priority. Thank you for sharing your story.
- gloriousinquisitorRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Having only read the first 3 chapters is not enough to provide me a full picture for a more precise feedback, but as a lover of science-magic-clashing genre, I can certainly assure you that your work has potential. However, I will be pointing out that the info about the exact ratio of black gunpowder is largly unneccessary, as all you gonna need is introduce them in a simple way like: "Black gunpowder is made of *insert materials*". That how many percent of each material is quite an eyesore and might break the flow in some case. Remember, not everyone here is fond of reading technical details, so if you gonna introduce something new in the future, make it as simple as possible in layman term.
Otherwise, again, this is just great. - kingleo8Royal Road★★★★ 4.0Only 2 chapters are done but they are good and characters do think. I will edit this when more chapters come out.
- treehouseRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Looks interesting ..i am gonna wait for more chapter :)