Origin of the Invincible Merchant
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Description
One day, a Rogue God has decided to end his immortal life and leave a memento for the world he's leaving. He plucks a young 16 year old Alexander from America and decides he's the perfect person to do this with. He sends Alexander to a new world of fantasy but first he gives him what he's always jokingly fantasized about, the Powers/Skills/Abilities from the games he's played and some from games he hasn't played, As well as some info on where Alexander's going. However, there's a price for giving Alexander all these powers. Let's dive into the story of how Alexander changed his name to Alex Ander and became the Invincible Merchant!
Information
- Status
- Cancelled
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- Sckribe
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 109
- Views
- 29,532
Chapters(10 total)
- Chapter 9: A Quest of Utmost ImportanceOct 1, 2017
- Chapter 8: Dinnertime and Divine DiscussionsJun 14, 2017
- Explanation 1: SkillsJun 7, 2017
- Chapter 7: Chats and ChangeMay 29, 2017
- Chapter 6: New BeginningMay 29, 2017
- Chapter 5: Legendary Ancient Dragon God Hero (Mouthful, Idn't it.)Apr 18, 2016
- Chapter 4: A place to stayApr 3, 2016
- Chapter 3: SundayApr 1, 2016
- Chapter 2: Nothing can beat this!Mar 31, 2016
- Chapter 1: Deal with the God who I will never remember fondly enough.Mar 31, 2016
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Community Reviews(2)
- CamdewRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I've enjoyed the chapters written as of 10/2/17. Previously gave four stars for lax grammer and another op character story. However, the author recently resumed the story and the grammar is better. I like the angle the author is taking so far. It doesn't feel like the character's op-ness is going to affect much besides the select few that know how truly powerful he is. I really want to see where the author takes this story. It's not the best story on RR I've read, but it's one I look forward to most.
- kauntykikiRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Okay.... I am not a writer, so I am not really qualified to correct what you have written. As a reader, though, I think that the story definitely needs tweaking. Both on the sentence structure and that it needs more detail. It felt rushed. I think you should slow down and really take the time to flesh out the people and the world building. You can tell that you might not have a lot of writing experience but that is alright because that is what this type of website is for. It is to test out your ideas and get some practice writing before you send out your finished product. My advise is to please keep going with this story because the story idea is a good one and I would like to know how it ends.