Origin Dungeon
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Description
What are dungeons?
The most common held beliefs are either that they are Crystallized Mana Formed under great pressure in mana dense environments... Or a kind of monster created by some god.
Curious, because at the beginning of time. When all matter was compressed so tightly prior to the great expansion of the universe. Why was no dungeon birthed then.
Or was there?
~AN: If you spot any grammar errors, or falacies in thought. Please message me or comment on them. I re-read to try and verify accuracy, but being only 1 person. I will of course miss things. At the moment the story is written using Microsoft Word, run through spell-check, as well as some online spell-checkers. Call me a Grammar Nazi... I Dont Care. lol.~
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- Mastersgtjames
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 27
- Views
- 5,697
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(4)
- Red_FauxRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Lovely. Please continue to write this masterpiece.
- b51015Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0Amazing!!!
Simply amazing!!!
please continue the story.
The reason for not giving 5/5 x 5 is that I believe anything can improve (does not need to)
the idea to receive story parts from readers is cool. But I suggest you make some of your own (a few a year is enough, hopefully once a month)
and if he(mc) does not decide to live in a limited body I SUGGEST you only display his POV / thoughts in a few sentences at the end or start of the chapter (exception if needed)
and last. you should weave some story's together (= the visitors meet each other)
Regards b51015 - BoglonRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5I found this story to be a very refreshing take on the usual dungeon story.
I liked the idea of starting the charater out as the most powerful being in existance, and then giving them a completly different outlook on life to what is normal. It is what makes sense when you think about it, but generally not what is followed. I may be a bit biased in the end due to my love of the idea of how a story would unfold if it featured the first being to every exist as MC.
I came across 2 or 3 slight spelling mistakes or sentance structures that were wrong/confused me but otherwise very good grammar.
At only a few chapters at this point in time I would recomend those who are not sure to give it a go as it will not take much of your time in any case.
But for those who like these ideas, and would like to see where it may go then i say GIVE IT A READ!!! - TiedStringsRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0The charachters seem a bit.. forced, to say the least. The idea behind it is good, the grammar is amazing (fucking grammar nazi...), The style is also unique, so, overall it's quite good. Thumbs up!