Orgins of Nature Wizard and the Earth Force Defenders
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About Hazard comics part of my whole book about Nature Wizard about how he got his powers how hazard comics got made. How he created his own world then his friends got powers and became superheroes and I Nature Wizard trained everyone then made a team called Earth Force Defenders a team that contains 16 members and plus Nature Wizard showing you how they discovered there powers and orgins of everything about nature Wizard and earth force Defenders.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- MegaVibe2023
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.5/ 5.0
- Views
- 828
Chapters(4 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- GallegReaderRoyal Road★★★ 3.0interesting concept you have with the m.c but there's a a lot that needs work. I highly recommend you look up how to "show" and not "tell". I feel like you are writing in a far too expositional manner. The world is cool but the writing and grammar needs to be polished more. Also this is a really LONG chapter. Break this up into digestible pieces and roll chapters out. Keep on working, writing takes time to get right and with practice you'll get there.