Order: The Symbolic's Tale of Telekinetic and Family

This is my first entry on my novel called "Order" It follows the life of James Roy, a Commandent Major of the 3rd Lancer Elite who quickly finds himself as a leading District Commissioner, of the royal army of the Legions of the New Order. With no father figure to guide him, James must find a purpose in his existence, and understand his telekinetic power he has not yet fully understood. He found his calling through the life in the military. **Please feel free for feedback, it truly helps with making the story present itself better. This is original work written by me.