Order of Dragonblood
Self-Published
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Description
The Order of Dragonblood is the leading force of Religion on Tarros. They held this power for multiple millenia and had firm control of the history and future of the citizens of Tarros. Their raign almost at an end one might come to wonder; How did it start? And why did they become so powerful?
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- UmbraChronicles
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 1,174
Chapters(7 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- ChaosOverloadRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0The style of the story fits more of a written novel than a webnovel. Some paragraphs are too long but overall it is well organized. I like the breaks between chapters although it is unfortunate that that means that they arent always of similar length. The different chapter titles add greatly to the appeal of the story on the other hand.
The story is intruiging to me. There is hints of a greater world and I am kind of sad that it is only a short story. Even still. Love the worldbuilding. The characters add a great deal to the impact of the story. They balance out a setting which is not highlighted in great detail.
Grammar is average. A lot of the sebtences are too short and there could have probably been one more revision process before publishing. Otherwise solid. Although the direct speech quotations threw me off at the beginning. As I am German i seem to recognize them from written fiction here. The entire direct speech is following that trend. I would suggest to shore up your english direct speech a little bit more.
Love the morally gray characters here. One of them insane the other deluding himself to bee the hero. Exited to see where they end up. I especially like the crazed way Tarander interacts with himself. The constant jumps between vocal outbursts and monologue via thought are very intruiging.