Orb Universe

Self-Published

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Description

Lukito, a seasoned 36-year-old construction worker, never expected his life to end in a tragic accident—nor did he expect to awaken in a new realm called theOrb Universe. Reborn in the battle-worn body ofHikaru, a young warrior felled by war, he finds himself in a world where game-like mechanics govern reality, and the whims of gods shape the very fabric of existence.

In this vivid universe teeming with elves, beastmen, and other mythological creatures, he must navigate a treacherous path where the lines between good and evil blur. Join Hikaru on his journey as he dives into a reality that defies normal preconceptions and becomes entangled in a complex and captivating narrative of power, destiny, and survival.

Expect:+ Smart MC+ MC who Makes strategic decisions+ Realistic Character growth

What NOT to Expect:- Harems- Murderhobo MC- Caricature villains

* Regular updates on Wednesday and Sunday.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Orby_Creator

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.2/ 5.0
Followers: 154
Views: 26,605

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Community Reviews(3)

juliana168Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
An interesting story with a unique premise so far!
Style: The author skillfully maintains the perfect tone throughout, enhancing the narrative's impact. The tone itself is consistently logical and well-structured, which aligns seamlessly with the high fantasy genre. This careful attention to tone and style not only enriches the world-building but also ensures that the reader remains engaged and immersed in the story's intricate details.
Story: The story stands out with its unique concept, offering something vastly different from anything else out there. Set in a distinctive universe with its own set of rules, it immerses readers in a world that feels fresh and original. The author has crafted a rich, imaginative landscape that defies conventional tropes and surprises at every turn. Unlike any other novel I've read so far, this story introduces innovative elements and twists that keep the narrative exciting and unpredictable.
Grammar: I couldn't find any grammatical errors, which doesn't mean they don't exist, but they certainly aren't glaring. Any minor errors that might be present are unlikely to distract you from enjoying the story.
Character: The characters, both main and side, are captivating. The main character is strategic and multi-dimensional, and the side characters are equally intriguing. No complaints here!
Overall, I highly recommend this story.
In Summary: This story captivates with its well-conveyed themes and intriguing plot. It's exciting to anticipate how the author will further develop the main character as the narrative unfolds.
mrfuffnekRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Great story with a slightly rough start! Author is a bit too excited by their admitently interesting magic system and thus infodumped a bit too early so i docked half a star. I would still recommend everyone to give this a chance even if it means skimming the early chapters (1-5).
WilliamGabriel10Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The style and grammar of this story are good and I did not notice any serious issues. Granted, I am no expert, but english is not the authors first language. So this is very impressive. The author has obviously put a lot of effort into building the world. There are elaborate sets of rules which are clearly and rationally explained. There are names put out for the various nations and a general gist of the worlds politics has been given in a few chapters. The protagonist, Hikaru, is well-established alongside his supporting cast.
The main problem, if I had to choose one, is a need for more emotional punch. Sometimes, there is a little too much telling and not enough showing. In addition, while the exposition is well thought out, it can sometimes be a bit dry. This bogs down some of the early chapters a lot. But this is nothing that could not be fixed with a bit of editing or a minor rewrite. Some of the dialogue, though, is a bit impersonal and stilted. It is difficult to describe, but a lot of characters don't speak like ordinary people.
Even so, it has quite a few original ideas. And if you're interested in a LitRPG, this one will do it for you.