Oracle To Sapien
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*IGNORE this if you want to. I'll be working on improving my English and writing a better version.*
(This was me just testing the waters, I'm unsure if I will pick this up again, but I am making another story that I WON'T drop. I would also like to thank the people that provided constructive criticism that gave me a solid idea of what to write about and how I should do it. I will return with a much more improved story after my English and writing has reached a level to which I would respect)
A figure awakens in agony. He falls to the floor and crawls his way to an exit. He opens the door and finds himself free falling in the sky. The ground was getting more and more visible. SPLAT. He awakens to a worried man approaching him. He will soon discover what this world has to offer. The people, cultures, and adventures.*DROPPED*
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- Hiatus
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- Enchanter
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- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 5
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- The VagrantRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5I like the blank slate start. The readers have no idea what's going on, mc has no idea what's going on. He's just going through the motions. I liked that the mc started to be a little more expressive and I hope for further character developmen. Grammar is good. The style is okay for starting out as your first story. I personally like it, but everything is subjective. I like where the story is going and I think this is my cup of tea. I didn't give you a full 5 stars because there aren't many chapters out yet for me to be the judge of the overall story. I would love to see your story, style, and characters develop. I promise to change my rating to 5 stars after future chapters. The story is able to draw you in from chapter 1. It's straightforward and simple enough to imagine the world in your mind. Simple doesn't always mean bad, but I think most people (me included) love reading juicy details. You can take this advice, but don't go overboard with it. You don't want to lose your readers with long details that don't add anything to the story. I like your story and style as it is, but everyone can improve better than before. I hope to follow you on this journey.