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Description
I need more eyes on the work before the real publication
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- LaBarnacle
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 350
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5The author wanted some engagement on this and it is a piece that has some odd things, such as backwards 'S's in the later part of the chapter, opens with a dream, and gets to be confusing. It has some profanity and the issue with Michael learning, adjusting and interacting in such a way made figuring out what the hook was. I think the biggest issue was purposely making backwards letters which is very grating on the reader.