One Strange Town and A Lindworm
Self-Published
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Description
Larkspur had thought that she wanted to go anywhere away from her middle of nowhere small town. In her mind, anywhere hadn't included some wierd alternate world that she was magically transported to where she was forced almost immediately to marry a lindworm prince. Now, her and the lindworm prince will have to work together if she wants to get back to the home she was so desperate to leave.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- IlaHaglund
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Views
- 941
Chapters(4 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- normancraneRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0The first chapter is an effectively written introduction (to the town, the main characters and the magical hook to the story) with a cliff-hanger ending that did make me want to read on to discover whose wrinkly face Larkspur had seen. The narrative style is breezy and conversational, a young adult style that I could easily imagine as a Netflix series. My one suggestion (probably stolen from an old Wordplayer article) is that by introducing your main characters together doing nothing more interesting than sitting and talking, you gave up the chance to introduce them separately and in action, which is usually more memorable.