One Look to Rule the Heavens

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Description

What would you do if you were told you were going to reincarnate into a world of immortals and have three wishes?

What happens if things don't go the way you thought?

With no knowledge of the world at large, our MC will stumble his way through with knowledge not his own, a body not his own, and power that doesn't belong to this world.

One look to rule the heavens.

One flap to travel the earth.

One thought to destroy them all.

I do not own the cover photo. It was drawn by silverbloodwolf98 on deviantart (If someone wants to draw me one let me know)

I do not own the rights to some of the ideas in the story as this is a FanFic (Please don't sue me, I have no money)

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: Gabriella Bentz

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Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 372
Views: 150,118

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Community Reviews(10)

MyumaraRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
A nice take on a cultivation story with elements from Naruto and one piece. The story so far has done things in a way that I don't feel like I've read this story a million times.
The grammar is not bad, maybe around 4-6 mistakes a chapter but it doesn't make much a difference.
I'm enjoying the story so far an have nothing to complain about.
While the character is OP it still feels realistic and he has some challenges
Jtw1000Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Good, enjoyed it so far as of chapter 10. I give it 5stars just cause it was fun reading it and for support^
I couldn’t find anything that I disliked about the novel seemed relatively unique and the character interaction wasn’t dull. That’s all I need
Shadow of doubtRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It's rare to find a novel that really gets my attention, I'm quite fond of one piece and naruto sp this novel got my attention, sure the prologue is a little... Weird I guess, but every thing else is nice and we'll done.
On a side note without prior knowledge of one-piece and naruto most of our MC's powers will confuse you.
I will note that the MC isn't a good person, but not a ruthless murder who kills on sight, he is fine of you don't attack him, he gives a few chances before he acts, when he does he considers you an enemy. So I'd rank the MC as chaotic neutral with a tad bit of evil in there.
However, if you compare his morality with the other characters in wuxia, he's a saint.
This book isn't for people who can't handle evil actions, but if you're just here for a story, you'll be quite satisfied, if not I'd suggest something else.
A shame it's been dropped however, perhaps the author will pick it up again, perhaps not.
Thunderpuppy21Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I review based on my own enjoyment. While sad that it’s been dropped i’ll Still throw it in the follow In case you ever decide to start it up again.
PonsRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The mc is getting on my nerve and is also getting stupider. Chap 12
It like he can't think straight and is arrogant also did I mention he can't think straight?
JebzRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I have a good time reading and can't f in and anything I have a problem with
TheDarkMistRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The Characters can feel one dimension with no personality some of the time. The MC can by just absolutely stupid at times in the story, the grammar is better than some of the stories I have read defiantly not the best but it is ok. The Style I just do not like, just the way you have everything played out, in general, is bad. The story feels like it has no plot most of the time and just feels like you make it up on the go without any idie of what's coming next. So to end the review will give it a 3 to a 2.5, not the best but its ok
trekshcoolRoyal Road
★ 0.5
It was a good and fun read....until the author dropped it.
TheCatsPjamasRoyal Road
★ 0.5
Absolutely loved it, a damnable shame that you've dropped it, hence the tiny overall score. If ever this resumes I'll definitely be upping it.
Hint to author: Some people dont like stuff and are more than within their rights to share that opinion, throwing a tantrum does nothing to those people because they didn't enjoy reading it in the first place. What it does do is leave a sour taste in the mouths of all those who were enjoing your novel and no longer have the opportunity to do so. Please reconsider!
EncodedRoyal Road
★ 0.5
This story is pretty much everything you don't want to read.
The characters have zero personnality, the mc becomes a killing machine on day 1 of his reincarnation, has no feelings and is a typical xianxia mc. The side characters are simply there, they have no personality beyond a simple trait that defines them.
The powers of the mc are confusing to anyone that never watched naruto or one piece and are badly explained with a focus on how they look when the reader has no idea what they are supposed to be doing or even how they work.
The story is pretty much non-existent and it also has a harem and a bunch of sex which reinforce my theory that this is simply the author's personnal little power-trip.
Yet even all of that wouldnt deserve a 0.5 star review, or even a review at all.
No, what is deserving of such a score is the author's reaction to criticism and his unwillingness to accept negative opinions. Going as far as to say he is gonna drop his story because of a single negative review and a few hate comments.
In his post he plays the victim explaining that RRL did nothing, even though he reported the negative review and goes on to express his disapointement in RRL as a site giving power to haters and unfit for authors to share their works.
The fact that the author went so far as to report a negative review because it didnt suit his ego is mind-blowing, but like a child that got said no, he went on a little tantrum dropping his story in the process.
Would not recommend to anyone.