one less sheep from the fold
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Description
a (very) short dialogue about the loss of one's faith
id love some feedback !
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- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2025
- Author
- spadesotospeak
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 90
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- RznRoyal Road★★★ 3.0This scene goes back and forth about the loss of faith and some ideas of what a well-lived life is. The arguments here are simple and it talks less about faith and instead more of a loss of meaning in life. The ending is fairly awkward as there is no conclusion or resolution. The piece could use a copyedit and some trimming of the rambling in the dialogue because it gets a bit wordy. For a piece about the loss of faith, the topic of faith is fairly secondary here. It was a decent read, but it doesn't give an answer or put forth something to have a lasting effect on the reader.