One Foot in front of the Other
Self-Published
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Description
On his way back home from war, a knight struggles with what he has done, facing his darkness.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2025
- Author
- CIglesias
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 91
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5This short story has a lot of elements and goes to a state of mind that makes Jacen seem a little unstable, even delusional. Seeing the faces and hearing the voice of others are signs of a troubled mind. The dynamics and purpose here with the Old Hag and Jacen is not clear and the final lines are strange to have been spoken aloud to an unknown voice. The piece lacks context to make it understandable, but is otherwise well-written.