One Eyed Wanderer

Self-Published

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Description

Saito Ushiba an average 17 years old High schooler decides to play a newly released virtual reality game developed by vision, the leading gaming company introduces "Grand Quest Online" changing the future of gaming, Saito ushiba joins Grand Quest Online on its first day of release as an unnamed player due to a glitch, whilst playing he goes through a series of events which turns the Saito ushiba into a living legend within the game and outside of the game.

Note: Warning the description might be misleading

Also, the Novel will not be too long, although I'm not sure how many chapters it will take for me to finish the story I am sure it will not exceed 150 chapters. Just wanted to let you know since I don't plan on writing long novels due to my preference.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: Generosity

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
Followers: 79
Views: 31,974

Chapters(15 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

LeahterRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Welp I don't know really how or why but this novel suddenly got me and I am becoming inpatient for next releases. The character development was a little bit fast and things suddenly got tense when one vr device could affect your real life and the game company. Still the writing style is good and story development is good too. I just wonder how long this novel will last.(because of sudden Op development)
(This time with Mario Accent)
İt iz a gooda novela
legianaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
So far the story hasn’t intrigued me as there isn’t enough to read, and I am looking forward to more chapters. The chapters need to be abit longer and please release new chapters More constantly. Thanks
SilenceRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This is a good story, but no post has been made for 4 months PLEASE WRITE MORE!!
halycon404Royal Road
★★ 1.5
There's a problem with how it gives out information. Instead of letting the main character learn things on his own and in turn let us know, the author often speaks in asides. This leads to the problem that when the character does learn about it I've no emotional investment in it. No sense of discovery. The whole thing just falls flat.
Another problem is the RR new author mistakes for people who've read more bad LN translations than actual novels. 1. First vs Third Person. Shifts constantly and mid paragraph. 2. The over use of character names. I know who the character is, he's the only one in the scene, I don't need to keep being told Saito does something. Who else would do it, no-one else is there. 3. Emoting. Sighs, grins, blah blah blah. Is it a sad sigh, a happy sigh, a content one. Novels are not visual. We're inside the character's head. We don't need to know a character emoted, we need to know how and why. There's no picture to go with an emote for us to know what it's actually conveying.