One Billion Players
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
When a tower falls from the sky and God tells humanity that they have 50 years to conquer it the world goes crazy. Follow Kim Young as he becomes one of the only people who isn't one of the one billion selected.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Eldridge horror
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 7
- Views
- 1,009
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- gej302Royal Road★★★★ 3.5Early days, hard to give lots of review here, but you requested one:
Story: Story start is a bit cavalier. Might offend anyone with Covid losses in their family/friends. Decent pacing so far. Minor info-dump bit in the front end, but those don't bother me.
Character: Only 1. He's got flaws and strengths, some denial, so that rings pretty real. No side characters exist outside of props (dead parents, unconcious sister).
Grammar: Many errors. Strongly recommend use of external grammar checking tool.
Style: 1st to 3rd shift halfway through chapter one was a bit unexpected, might rework first part of intro? Several formatting issues.