On the Outskirts of Minazuki

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Might contain a bit of profanity on the later chapters, but the language may be softened up from the translation. I just kept it on just in case.

This was from the old story that I TL'd to English. The old one's already completed, I was just doing some TL and editing the parts where it didn't make much sense. The plot would be unchanged so you could enjoy it regardless.

Basically this was my attempt on making a lighter Yuri story, more on the side of Shoujo-ai I guess. The story was about two childhood friends who grew up in the small town and attended the same Middle School in a big city connected by the railways. One day, their feelings blossomed towards another and they start to tread towards this path of 'Forbidden Love'. Well that's pretty cliched lol. Their antics were sometimes kinda absurd though.

Anyway, I couldn't explain much. It all start when I thought about writing one based on trains, or was it a train station? Oh well, I totally forgot. I was just happy I could finish an actual story from the way back. Now I felt so goddamn rusty lol.

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Status
Completed
Year
2018

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3.8/ 5.0
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9
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2,652

Chapters(3 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • RznRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The author wrote this with the intention of being a light yuri/shoujo-ai piece and it is definitely relaxed and more accessible in its emotional beats. It can be a little awkward at times, but nothing is glaringly wrong with the story. The pacing is perhaps the biggest issue, because it is inconsistent in its presentation. Across all three chapters, it is still enjoyable and it comes to a good ending.