(On Hold) Regarding my time being a God, it was fun

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After winning the lowest prize from Divine Lottery, a young man was thrown, by Goddess of Fortune, into a fantasy world and became a God. With only a small land as his sanctuary, he strives to protect his shrine from being destroyed…This is hardly an original idea, but the concept caught my interest so I decided to write it just for fun.There are a bunch of holes and gaps in the story line since I’m just making it up to fit my interests as I go. I warned you~ Read at your own risk of getting irritated over some details.Status: Starting Volume Two

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2016
Author
oddhatter

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMULTIPLE LOVERSROMANCE SUBPLOT

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
2,116
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646,192

Chapters(30 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • DiamondBankerRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    to lazy to type, just read this story
    addicting
  • daoescapeRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    1. Unique Reincarnation  [ CHECK ]
    2. Weak Protagonist but actually OP since he reincarnate        [ CHECK ]
    3. Good and simple grammar [ CHECK ]
    4. PLOT TWIST [ CHECK ]
    Whats more did you want?
  • kabsRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Style
    A great way of writing, esasy to read,and scenes are so easy to visualise, it's effortless, keep up the good work here
    Story
    A brilliant start, liked how it was poking fun at some cliches, and doing so in a was that's fun to read
    Grammar
    I haven't noticed anyting wrong, seems perfect.
    Character(some mild-large spoilers here)
    The character of the MC is built very well, I like how you've made him strong, but not at the same time, by being one god in a thousand.
    Leias character is built well, although I thought having magic fix her trauma was a bit of a cop-out. Still, I can see how it makes sense, if that's not her real personality, like it seems to hint in some of the latest chapters(latest current chapter is 17).
    I would like it if there was a bit more of a personality given to the villian, some good examples of villians with a well written character are Obito from Naruto
    All in all, a great story definitely worth reading
  • kariRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    It needs more chapters! :D
    m highly anticipating how the story will progress. M guessing it'l turn serious later? idk
    it'l be good either ways m sure
    kudos to the author for your first story! I just hope ur able to continue with the same standard. Many books start out great but end up mediocre cuz they just drag it out/lose interest/ideas. I sincerely hope urs stays good :)
  • SadPotatoesRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    eThe story have simple grammar that everyone can understand and enjoy, the story is unique and great. Sure it have some plot holes or whatever but I am sure as the story goes on it will probably be fill or fix. Well for the easy going readers or many others, I suggest you read this story because to me, its a relaxing story that I can just chill and enjoy
    …..Well keep up the good work!
  • yoian213Royal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    It's good but my only problem isn't the story or characters at all I just think your going to end up as it like a dungeon story like a lot of others that around chapter 40 crash and burn ending up dropped. So please be careful when writing this so it stays with he's a God idea I mean plenty of story's would have him become evil or what not and fight other gods or have humans view him as evil but those story's end up backing themselves into a corner because the MC ends up with little or no room to expand due to them becoming a way to op dungeon that is already to strong for all mortals. So please keep this story awesome it has a lot of potential in it and is already a great read.
  • BlueSpiderRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Volume 1 was epic but vol.2 was -_-
  • XirheartzRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Bro, why must u do dis !!! I enjoyed the bulding stuff arc but he only got 20+ believers and the plot meteor suddenly drops UGH!
    Spoiler alert:
    1k slaps for dat god in da twilight something kingdom lol he’s freaking as$hole. >:(
    So if u guys looking for a smooth and a fresh story.
    I recommend this one. ENJOY! ?
  • Batman but betterRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    THE GOOD:
    i like what you tried to do with your story>
    The world is very interesting an cool
    the main character is very solid and is likable
    THE BAD:
    Every side character sucks
    Liela recovers way too fast for a sex slave that had literally been raped  for many years & many people till she was nothing but a cesspit of disease , this made her harder to attach too and not only that but she is all too soon returned to a virgin due to the magic and then slipped neatly into the stereotypical innocent girl trope and all that is lost and the character is treated like a innocent ditsy chick. Why in gods name am i meant to care when that big moment happens in the beginning of volume two.
    IS EVERY OTHER MAN ACCEPT THE MC GOING TO BE A BAD GUY OR SIMPLY UNIMPORTANT? you managed to get through a whole volume without even introducing an cool male character but you managed to get four hot female prisoner and and two week main girls for the MC to flirt with but didn't even so much as introduce a male character that's not ether a scumbag or simply unimportant . The hole "MC is the greatest thing that happened to women or the world in general" is what kills stories and it needs to be addressed.
  • GrayshadeRoyal Road
    ★ 0.5
    The story is a giant plot hole. Dead ends and just discarding 10 chaoters for something stupid etc etc...