(OLD) Balance with Reincarnation
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*UPDATE* If the premise below interests you then check out my profile. I'm having to redo this book for various reasons and I'll begin posting the new series sometime during the first seven days of October. I'm going to be posting a chapter everyday of the month under a new fiction.
Balance with Reincarnationis a dark fantasy multi-novel series set around an semi-overpowered antagonist who reincarnates on the world Aeon. He wants to not only save his undead elven kingdom from the oblivion from whence it came from, but kill the one who reincarnated him.
The story will primarily beabout kingdom-building, worldbuilding, war, romance, sex, and a bit of adventuring. This book, at least at the moment isn't meant for readers who want instant gratification.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Yama Kame
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- 3.6/ 5.0
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- 12
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- 390
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- MOROSERoyal Road★★★★ 4.0One of the main upsides to this story is that it takes many steps to detail the features of the game Re:Kingdom, giving the reader a detailed portrait of this game. This part of the story was well done, and quite interesting.
The story does have a few flaws, such as occasionally questionable grammar. There are a few question-marks where they possibly shouldn't be, and a few other errors or ambiguous words like 'promiscuously' used without clear context. It also spends a very long time on exposition, and doesn't really give the reader a direct portrayal of the game being played. The exposition does set out an interesting scenario for the novel, but it also lasts for a while and doesn't give the reader a clear sense of where the story is anchored. The time-line also seems blurred, as the MC's concerns are presented in present-tense, but the story then says that he was selling off his citizens to slavery for some time, meaning that the reader is uncertain when the 'present' of the story is. The scene where the MC is transported in isekai fashion is a bit animated and melodramatic, in a way that is perhaps supposed to invoke the conventions of the isekai genre, but it does come across as a slightly abrupt change in tone after the preceding tale of kingdoms and guild warfare.
However, the clear presentation of the game's features is valuable, and people who are interested in game-focussed lit may find some good passages here.