Oh great, another dungeon reincarnation!
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A recent addition to the afterlife comes face to face with a god.
Not the old, kind one mind you, but the kind who screws around with people for fun.
In this case, our main character, forced to be a dungeon!
It wouldn't be so bad, except the god refuses to give a menu, tutorial, or even a fairy! Now armed only with memories of Earth, our lead character is forced to change their life as a dungeon with moral standards to a crystal bent on deception, twists, and domination!
Please note:The character will be a dungeon, obviously, but will still have human emotions. They will not care if they kill or do other things to living beings. That said, they can still have feelings. There will be immoral acts. Also this one may be a bit slow moving at the beggining (EDIT: Apparently I have not made this clear enough. It is slow at the beginning, which is -A New Beginning-. and as a dungeon who just got revived and has human-like emotions, he/she gets antsy, as would anyone.) There will be no LitRPG boxes or text(except for other's points of view), but it is later added.
Release dates: Well you see the exact release scheduale is... whenever i feel like it! No, i'm not going to ditch you, but I have changed my ways from a frequent short chapter releaser to a delayed, long chapter pleaser. The first arc will keep it's 1,500 to 3,500 words per chapter, but for future releases expect at minimum 2500.
Cover: This cover was made by Laty, who not only draws but also writes stories, so go check him out!!!
Arc 1- How it all went downhill. (A new beginning, Will of the dungeon, When life gives you lemons- 38,714 words)
Arc 2- Troubles afoot. (Flight of the Valkyries, Fall Asunder)
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- Hiatus
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- ShadeHaven
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- 3.5/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(5)
- FoxRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0This story is a lotta fun right now!
The MC has some charm, which adds to the read!
Read it, you'll love it - HetelikaRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0This needs more love and attention!
The book is unusually funny and frank, sentences are straight to the point and the SIDE CHARACTERS were fleshed out with damn good effort, not just some funny, linear stupid characters (unlike the other isekais found in RR—)
Every chapter left me hanging and craving for more, keep it up! This is the kind of story I would love for people to enjoy!
Though there is TWO things I dislike in the story,
where to start..? Uhh, let’s address the thick layer of gas we are mostly having trouble with.
Firstly, as the guy Levant mentioned.
Spellings and grammartical error in first five chapters. Although I am a slighty disoriented from english speaking and would require a thorough investigation on sentences to sniff out the error; I had to waste more than time needed to read one chapter.
Some of your sentences are perfectly constructed but, yeah... That’s about it.
Second, not too much of a description of certain characters. Lily did not have a description of her appearance although mentioned in some chapters until the later Will of the Dungeon chapter. MC did not describe his color but!
BUT!
Thank you cover! I can now imagine Soryne being blue.(Glad you have a cover now)
Spoiler: Spoiler
And last one (Yes I know I said two but this isn’t addressed as a problem, tehee)
W h y d i d y o u k i l l R i n ?
Thank you and goodluck writing, I am loving it so far despite the things I’ve mentioned.
(Fun fact: I found this book through the... REVISEclad. Love your edits!) - LevantRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0The story is overall good, interesting and easy to read. I love the carefree personality of the protagonist! I am really looking forward to the development of this book
Though... I would give the story all 5 stars if you will take your time and fix your spelling, I don’t really mind the grammar since I am not a native english speaker.
Keep on publishing stories! - PatchworkKnightRoyal Road★★★ 3.0Edit: wanted to clarify that if the gaslighting stuff doesn't bother you, this was otherwise a refreshing and enjoyable read. If that's not a deal breaker for you, consider this a recommendation. Mostly made this review to make sure people aren't caught off guard by it.
Concept is good. Trope subversion was enjoyable. I also really appreciated the gender fluid mc.
Gaslighting completely vkilled the story for me and I lost all interest. I'm really disappointed because it was really enjoyable until then. - rusticsoldierRoyal Road★★★ 2.5Okay normally im not mean. But i feel vindictive after wasting so much time reading up to the first interlude. This was extremly boring im not saying the author does not have talent. They can clearly write. It is just mind blowing boring. Each chapter i thought wow that was dense and stupid.. it is probably a new author. Give them time to express themselves. It will get better after all. the writing itself is good. The concept is good. The mc is supposed to be not a moron, over powered, however able to do critical thinking. Instead we get a lazy mc who only has wierd little mental trips. That does absolutely nothing. And flipps gender 3 times in a page it feels like.
I think the problem was the story has barely any dungeon story. And the author was busy making in jokes with himself/herself. We had to ride all these horrible tangents. That are not funny. It was just bad use of time to read this. Im mad right now so i cant even give a good rating on the story itself. Because maybe this is some weirdos cup of tea. But i would advise against reading this story.
I wanted to give this a half star. That is how much i disliked this story. But because of the fact the author has some talent in writing clearly. I felt it wrong to go that low. I decieded to give this a 50% mostly for effort. Because clearly nothing else happened.