Odyssey of the Unrivalled

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Description

What do you do when you have it all? When you can do anything, go anwhere, know anything with less effort than stretching your fingers? When you feel jealous of any passer-by, just because they have something to do, somewhere to be?

The answer was simple to him: erase your memories, seal your power and live a normal life.

Still, something felt wrong. It just didn't feel... fulfilling.

But then a magical formation appears in his office, and he and his co-workers get catapulted into another world.

Profanity will be kept to a minimum, but will be included to keep realism. There will be some gore, vegans and animal activists alike beware. Will include some comedy, some meaningful conversation (I hope) and some things you will (hopefully) never expect in this genre. Hopefully quality will increase as it goes on.

No schedule for chapters, but they will keep coming. Feedback welcome.

View my other story athttps://royalroadl.com/fiction/13168/fork-this-life

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: jinxs2011

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Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 159
Views: 149,614

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Community Reviews(3)

MastersgtjamesRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Good story..
Good characters.
Good Environment/worldbuilding.
Nice fights/buildup.
looking forward to more.
twinkalicious.....
TurquoiseRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It starts slow, and takes some time before there is anything all that interesting happening. And even though the first chapters were all edited and rewritten there are still some signs of amateurish writing.
After a little bit, however, it really picks up and is surprisingly wonderful for something so unpopular.
There are still a few hiccups, like the introduction of Heather and her induction, which could have been handled much better, and some bits of bad dialouge (although im probably not the best opinion on that, as it is one of my biggest pet peeves.) But for the most part its absolutely great and i would definitely reccomend!
(Not as good as Fork This Life tho) 🍴
JerryHatrickRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
So this is giving me PTSD flashbacks of WN/LN Japanese protagonists where the strong or OP mc lets himself be bullied/misunderstood/discarded because he doesn't want to show off his strength and I just can't stand it. Will try to forge ahead at a later date and re-review.
Enjoyed the humor.