Observer Causality [Reader Interactive Sci-fi Adventure]

Information

Status

Ongoing

Year

2023

Author

Vitaly S Alexius

• 5 Cosmic Disco
  May 31, 2023
• 4 Hamster
  May 31, 2023
• 3 Standing on an Octagram
  May 31, 2023
• 2 The Observer
  May 30, 2023
• 1 Three Stars
  May 29, 2023
• 0 The Cosmic Judge and the Delivery Man
  May 28, 2023

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• ymerodraeth meicrodonRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  mmmmmmm microwaves could use more of them, perhaps impirial ones
  actually very good
  story is wonderfull (4.5/5)
  charachters are highly engageing(5/5)
  grammer is seeminly perfect (5.5/5)
  like the style but a bit frustrating if not already used to it (4/5)
  it needs more words
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• CommandRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Come on a journey with this wonderful story that marries esoteric philosophical concepts, a dystopian AI/LLM-driven future, creative community engagement, and stellar writing skills. Each new chapter is presented with an eccentric twist without subtracting from the narrative's foundation.
  The characters are incredibly interesting. A cynical deliveryman working a repetitive job due to the purpose it gives him (reminds me of the story of Sisyphus) while maintaining a rebellious streak. An otherworldly being who is literally defined by the perspective of others (a living mirror of our expectations). A supporting cast of memorable people, corporations, a hilarious cult, and semi-sentient robots.
  The final character is you, the audience. This story is shaped and changed in real time through our comments and reviews.
  A unique concept that is executed perfectly in my opinion. I'm excited to read more and bear witness to what happens next!
  *Who knows? Maybe the delivery man is going to become similar in composition to Zeniya through constant exposure. *
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  If you enjoy:
  Interacting with the story.
  Comedy with a taste of realism.
  Spontaneous combustion.
  Finding meaning in a meaningless world.
  Your Amazon deliveries arriving on-time.
  Observing phenomena until it becomes reality.
  Then this novel is for you.
• JoaquinRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

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• XultanisRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Style - In true Vitaly fashion, it's a wild and chaotic ride. The interactive aspects of the story make it no less so, but the author folds it well into the broader context of the story.
  Story - Boy meets eldritch entity beyond human understanding. Boy falls in love. Jokes aside, I did have to dock a half-star because it so far feels much like The Stars Have Eyes, but being what it is that can be partially attributed to the readers. The background draws heavily from Vitaly's other works, particularly Romantically Apocalyptic, but for those familiar it's like an old hat. Comfortable, familiar. To newer readers the broader context may seem a bit hard to grasp.
  Grammar - Thus far I think I've found one grammatical error, and a minor one at that.
  Characters - The protagonist Thomas shows a much higher degree of personal agency and initiative than the norm for a character in this situation. Zedix is gradually shifting (and there is a clearly stated and understood reason for this), while several minor characters from the interactive side of things show the occasional bit of depth.
  Overall, I wouldn't take things too seriously. It's a Vitaly style bowl of chaos, flavored by a teaspoon of reviews and a half cup of comments, blended into a wild and unpredictable ride. Could be fun, could go truly off the multidimensional rails at any moment, and your safety harness is improperly fastened.
• ishnerRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I will be updating this regularly as the story progresses
  Over all, very fun and you should join us in reading it.
  The story has grown and come into its own as we all hoped it would. We are comming in on a major confrontation, and I am quite excited.
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  FIRST - CONFIRMED, at the start of each chapter Vitaly will post screenshots of some number of things which are having an impact on the chapter. So far the following have been shown to have been shown to function.
  -Rating Statistics
  -Reviews
  -Comments
  SECOND - CONFIRMED, the greater the potential impact, the greater the required weight of observation. Changing minor details is easy, changing major events is hard. Weight is known to be increased by:
  - Getting First
  - Earning Rep
  - Reviewing
  - Advancing your Review
  THIRD - CONFIRMED: Characters are not directly controlled by the audience. They have their own internal character and act in response to circumstances as they would were they real. Orders given to characters occur as literal orders given to them from off screen, be it by radio, vision, intrusive thoughts, or something else. It is possible for you to appear directly in the story, giving those orders, but so far this has only happened off screen in sections of alternitive POV.
  FOURTH - CONFIRMED: Sometimes there is a pole at the bottom of a chapter. These actually do directly control the story via the mechanism of timeline selection.
  FIFTH - PENDING: Spoiler Boxes act as Causal Shielding. Use them if you want to discuss things without affecting the story.
  SIXTH - CONFIRMED: In order to manifest a group of personal followers you MUST leave a review. Without leaving a perminant observable mark on the story as a whole you are limited to momentary influence on a chapter by chapter basis. Do not feel pressured to review dishonestly though; a low star villain group is as valid as a anything else!
  SEVENTH - CONFIRMED: You can directly message Vitaly and provide additional characterization of your follower gro
• song gemerRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Observer Causality is an extraordinary book that takes readers on an exciting journey through an interactive science fiction adventure. Here are some beautiful things about Observer Causality:
  Innovative concept: Observer Causality stands out with its innovative concept of interactive reading. Readers have the opportunity to influence the course of the plot and the decisions of the characters, creating a unique experience and a greater sense of involvement.
  Fascinating story: The book has an interesting and complex story that keeps you engaged from beginning to end. It is full of intriguing twists, mysteries, and tension that will not let you put the book down.
  Deep characters: The author has managed to create vibrant and complex characters. Each character has their own personality, goals, and motivations, making their interaction with readers even more meaningful. It is easy to empathize with them and follow their emotional growth throughout the story.
  Science fiction world: Observer Causality takes you into an impressive world of science fiction. The descriptions of futuristic technologies, advanced social structures, and stunning visions of the future will delight all fans of the genre.
  Freedom of choice: One of the most beautiful aspects of Observer Causality is the freedom of choice. Readers have the opportunity to make decisions that affect the outcome of the story. This interactive aspect allows for a personalized reading experience and gives a sense of active participation in the book's world.
  Thematic depth: Besides being an exciting adventure, Observer Causality touches upon themes such as free will, determinism, and ethical issues. The author carefully explores these ideas through the plot and poses intriguing questions that encourage readers to contemplate.
  Observer Causality is a book that will satisfy science fiction enthusiasts as well as anyone looking for something new and exciting in the world of literature. With its interactive approach, deep stor
• Blu3JayRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  I really like this type of story some people don't, but I do, I think it just makes things unexpected happen. It's a nice change of pace from the routine. I wonder if Zen is gonna go berserk if/when her mailman is hurt. One last thing, it would be interesting to see how Zen would react to him dying, would she resurrect him somehow?
• protocenturianRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Well It would appear im quite late to witnessing this anomaly of a story/entity. It seems like alot of fun and the kind of story/entity that quite paradoxically has to be experienced rather than simply observed. While ive been a lurker and watcher on this site for a long time Ive never seen a story/entity that takes its interactive.
  Perhaps my stars and review will assist this young thomas in dealing with his annoying persuer's, perhaps my stars will simply be used to fuel a cosmic entities further existance. In either case this seems like an amazing story/entity for me to have amazingly found in its prime.
  Finally can I just mention how excited I am that the relationship of emisary and observed is finally blooming properly now that I have caught up on the temporal records that I have failed to interact with. Not only is it blooming, but its occuring on a ship no less just poetic and wonderful.
  Now enough gushing onto the review proper
  Style:
  Excellent
  Grammer:
  Excellent
  Story:
  Excellent
  Character:
  Excellent
  The style is unique and like nothing ive ever seen. While Ive interacted with interactive stories before they mostly took place through poll or submission. Rarely do you see a story this interactive.
  I am no expert with Grammer, but I have seen very few grammer mistakes.
  The story is in the best way possible a messy ball of twisted time and progression. Mostly due to the affect of outward influences such as myself and others. I quite like how uniquely this story takes that mess and makes its it own identity.
  Thomas and Zeniya are wonderful characters being pushed around a unvierse of obervers who are desperetly trying to reach and control the inately uncontrolable. Thomas is grounded and a bit of a rulebreaker, I would like to see him gain a bit more initiative and self assurace but I understand his reluctance considering the threats that face him. Zeniya is just wonderful no further explanation.
• KodismaximusRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Style: I like the futuristic aspect, and the lore and world building is very nice, now if we could just flesh it out a bit more. I understand it's something of a fun, unique project but I want more set dressing.
  Story: Very high concept, metaphysical and high stakes. The pacing feels a bit fast paced but I'm not put off by it. I'm enjoying the twists and turns.
  Grammar: I think across 20 chapters or so I noticed one odd grammar choice. Not even sure it was a mistake, potentially just two words switched around.
  Character: I am intrigued by the motivations of the main character Thomas, I am enjoying his perspective. The entity feels a bit like a neutral mask, less of a character and more of a plot device, but the scenes discussing motivation and emotion are impactful and intense. I enjoy it.
  Overall I'm excited to see where it goes, and see where the peanut gallery takes it in the future. The idea of a voter based story has been tried a few times, I can think of at least one on Tumblr. I would love to see a more ambitious project that was very open and interactive with its audience.
• DaveyNRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Davey rates this story 4 stars on grounds that I like to read it, but has it's perfect imperfections.
  Mostly some spelling issues that grind my gears but I am too lazy to notify the author about.
  And the story is best read while also having read his other works, don't ask me why or how, just DO IT.
  You don't have to, but it gives the story so much more going for it.
  Too bad I can't (re)read M.S. Fortune anymore, it is not fortunately mine to read anymore.
  Are we in the clear?
  GOOD!
  The last star is mine and mine to keep.
  But Dave, you keep getting smiles on your face while reading this story!
  I know, I know, but 4 is my lucky number and by the power of the Dutch ASS (Autisme Spectrum Stoornis) Virtual Explorers I give you all the virtual Luck I can muster.
  Your lucky pincode is 4444 btw, Magic Admin Security Terminal Execution Release.
  Autism for the win!
  Included battle cries:
  JA OWEEEEH! or OBJECTION!
  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
  Did I casually observe correctly or am I doing it wrong?
  Wouldn't be the first time I don't understand the world, HA.
  Dave ... stop rambling like and old man, you are not even 30 yet.
  Remember, the sudden headaches are normal.