Number One Commander

Self-Published

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Description

Life is an unfair game. If you were born rich and smart, then you were more than likely arrogant and cunning. If you were born poor and dumb, you were probably simple and ignorant. A commander is someone who protects his people regardless of their faults, position, and riches, but the Number One Commander is someone who would even protect the Galaxy itself.

Join Luon Fate, an engineer and a bookworm simpleton who changed the fate of humanity. Orcs? Elves? Demons? Cultivators? Follow Luon in another fantasy, sci-fi, martial artist novel in the making.

Releases on:

When I have time, maybe once a week hopefully?

Available On:

https://creativenovels.com/novel/number-one-commander/

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: ANormRobot

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 361
Views: 426,296

Chapters(140 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

TweedledeemeRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The start is a little abrupt feeling and the emotional response of the Mc is hard to believe considering the circumstances. Once you are past that it slows down and starts to feel more realistic. Overall a fun read at the time of this writing.
tyes77Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The introductions and settings are fun giving a nice sci-fi feel for a young teenage drama. Only cons might be some plotholes(capsules) can be glaring if you really think deeply but its a fun ride
AlekseyevRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I really Like the story, but you really REALLY need a better cover, i think you are not winning more readers because of it.
jacobpaigeRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
I only made it to chapter 3 before the nonsensical world building completely destroyed my willing suspension of disbelief. If you can fully shut off your brain, you might be able to enjoy this. I don't know though, since I wasn't able to do so.
It's also worth noting that, of those 3 chapters, almost all of it was info dumps. Perhaps the author got better about this later, after the nonsensical world was built, but I sincerely doubt it. And based on the quality of the limited dialogue, it might even have gotten worse after the exposition finally stopped.