Now I am Roselyn

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I was excited because of the new VRMMO game is going to arrive the next day so I could not sleep provoking me to go to the first day of university late...After I woke up I realized the time, so I hurriedly prepared myself and took a shortcut that for some reason no one dares to enter.After a while of walking, I found a girl. After this everything turned upside down.

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Well... I am really bad with this synopsis thing so I will leave until here.

By the way, I don't know if I will utilize the gore but I left it there because it is a possibility.

Chapters(11 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • wk - pppRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I like the story and the plot! :p
    though the grammar sometimes dosen't completly connect to what the char is saying and thinking?
    overall the story is good but sometimes confusing but we can't still say that this novel is amazing as we are still at the very beggining of the story :)
  • Dragon_ANGLRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Some of the chapters' grammar are more offputting than others, but granted that English is not the author's first language, that is forgiveable. The VR MMO introduction is sudden, with some holes in the story/lore, but it is also different from the usual fare.
    I look forward to the quality (and quantity) of the chapters ever increasing onwards.
  • grepmanduRoyal Road
    0.5
    After reading the first chapter, I felt this entire work could do with a lot of needed polish. Grammatically, there were far too many run on sentences I felt I was out of breath after reading through an entire paragraph. Maybe I'm too nitpicky, but I think the period, exclamation mark, or question marks could be used heavily in this work. Until then, I don't think I can sit through reading its entirety.