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TbabyeeeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
So, I saw the ad and decided to read it, and I’m absolutely glad I did. The story is amazing and kept me scrolling fast to see what happens next. The premise isn’t anything groundbreaking, but the author handled most troupes in a fresh way that keeps the plot interesting. There’s a mix of comedy, action, horror, and even a little drama.
Oh, there are a lot of stats, I mean a lot. So, be prepared for that.
The author’s writing style is great and I didn’t notice any jarring errors that could break immersion. The characters are nice and unique in their own way. For me, they aren’t your standard 2d cutouts. First review, but I think this story deserves it.
VeathenRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Unlike most system novels we get a bunch of prospectives from other characters, creatures and even other outside characters like a researcher going on about the tutorial. I hope you don't drop this author.
I would highly recommend, even if you havent enjoyed system novels before this.
Also the great gammer is quite a nice large plus.
QuintuscusRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Good job on the fiction! I am eager to read it all!
The xp could be a little better, but other than that, it works fine. I'm not that far in yet, maybe it's better explained later on.
anyway, tha k you for participating in the writeathon, and good job on the 3 weeks!
RedbunyipRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
A really fun read, all the characters are engaging.
I love the point of view of Rocky, you have don't well keeping track of what he may have worked out from the others and what he would not have a clue as to what a phrase means
I am hoping the heroes meet up with the other group soon, and push Moe down the stairs!
FeralgeistRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It is more accurate to say this author wrote rock hard for us all to enjoy. It is more fun to day this author made me rock hard and I enjoy it and now that he's trending plenty more people will get rock hard that haven't before.
Great story, nice development and finds that awesome balance between millions of bluescreens and knowing nothing about what the characters can do. Gives just enough for you to get the gist of their abilities. Fantastic work and I hope it is continued, reading it has been a blast
Mr Alex666Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
You would think, this is just another system-apocalypse story. It isn't.
May contain spoilers!
It starts as such - the MC and his class are caught in it somewhere deep in the Amazonas. After being captured by some paramilitary group, the MC is cast out. Why? Because he has an interesting and detrimental Stat! It's quite a nice idea, that not everyone necessarily has the same selection of Stats, some of them being pure Madness! THEN it gets interesting. His classmates are replaced by time-traveling assholes, who beat him up, because of something he will do in the future, and is left for dead.
Well, he IS an MC, usually, they don't die that easily and mostly get some unique Cheat Power ™ out of it. Guess what!
Story: it's a fun piece to read and there are unique ideas (mostly doing with the System in place), with a nice touch on world-building. Since we follow the MC, we aren't bombarded with chapter-long infodumps regarding the "new" world, and the MC isn't suddenly rule- and world-savvy because of reasons. Since the MC doesn't know sh**, and is "slightly" out-of-touch with the current state of affairs, WE also don't know much. I think it is good so. I think, however, that his stay in the "starter town" was cut a bit short, a bit of exploration, commerce, etc wouldn't have hurt, but that is only my opinion. I will go with a 5, mostly because the System-design.
Grammar: nothing much to say, I don't remember finding many (or any) mistakes - don't ask me about commas! But they looked good too. A 5.
Characters: I think, the MC is well-defined, the isekai-banter with his nerdy friends early on was a very nice touch. Even with his high number in a certain Stat, he comes about quite cold later on - I was never left by my "friends" for dead, but maybe a little bit more hatred, revenge fantasies and such wouldn't have gone amiss. There was a paragraph or so about finding his classmates and having a "talk", but that angle went pretty much into the background quite fast. No, ge
DeediRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I absolutely adore this story. The plot is simple, yet handled in a way that makes it hard for you not to care about it.
The book doesn’t have a lot of chapters at the moment, but it surprisingly has a lot of content, words if I should be more specific.
Why should you read the book? Well, it had ***spoilers*** it’s a well done Litrpg in an intriguing world (this hasn’t been fleshed out thoroughly but even the tiny bits we have seen has been great), filled with dynamic characters with a host of different abilities. The MC isn’t bland or uninteresting, and neither are the surrounding characters.
It’s early days, but I’ll be back watching this novel with great interest.
Mito8Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Need I say more?
Writing style: The author’s style is good for the genre. Not that simple but not complex, either. It’s easy to picture everything he describes and the story comes alive the further you read.
Grammar: It’s really good. You barely notice any errors.
Characters and plot: Fantastic! It’s a great story. But it isn’t without faults. I don’t like that the MC doesn’t spend much time in the starter city, but I can understand why. Then the story can be a little slow-paced because of the frequent stat updates. But it’s a solid read.
Donny251Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I like it. I will be more happy if this story can get translated until the end, and not dropping mid-way. Thank you so much!
The translations of Holy Roman Empire novel are not many out there.
Even if there any, I did not come across that have completing this novel.
Except machine translation of course.
YohaoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story started really well and I really want to know how everything will develop in the future.
For starters the story follows a young adult couple who somehow adopted a rock child to raise. The interesting stuff is that that happens while said couple was transported into a cave with giant spiders waiting around the corner to eat them.
The POVs are pretty good and the characters personalities are being developed consistently and the grammar is also great also the references are *chef's kiss*. There's some things here and there that can be better developed(like why the characters didn't go back to the cave they were before to loot some equips and other stuff) but that can happen in the future with no losses to the story.
I just want one thing and that one thing is that Mo-whatever his name gets kicked in the nuts, if that happens I'm absolutely fine with anything. Thanks for writing and good grades in your AP, author !

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