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Information

Status

Hiatus

Author

jassstinez

• Chapter 13
  Aug 7, 2022
• Chapter 12
  Aug 6, 2022
• Chapter 11
  Aug 4, 2022
• Chapter 10
  Aug 3, 2022
• Chapter 9
  Aug 1, 2022
• Chapter 8
  Jul 30, 2022
• Chapter 7
  Jul 28, 2022
• Chapter 6
  Jul 27, 2022
• Chapter 5
  Jul 24, 2022
• Chapter 4
  Jul 24, 2022
• Chapter 3
  Jul 21, 2022
• Chapter 2
  Jul 16, 2022
• Chapter 1
  Jul 14, 2022
• Prologue
  Feb 2, 2021
• #1 Why are Weeblords so toxic?
  Dec 31, 2017

Reviews

Community Reviews(6)

• Cedric The Rabbit SlayerRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  It's a story of a man who was sucked into a portal and is now forced to either conquer a magical tower or die miserably (twice).
  There's competition with other participants being set up, and the necromancer aspect is always a win!
  The story reads well, takes it's time to properly present the characters and the world, so it's really easy to immerse yourself in it.
  Also, due to a small "debuff" in the beginning, the MC must win this one with the power of brains, so hopefully the power of plot armour won't be necessary.
  The grammar is great, and you can tell the writer understands sentence flow/style.
  The only downside (for now) is that, although the MC sounds interesting, we don't know much about him just yet. Of course, this is just the beginning of the story, so there's plenty of time for that.
  However, there is plenty of lore being set up for the MC and world. There's plenty of world building with parties, enemies, and future obstacles being hinted at here and there.
  There's a big focus on strategy and troop management, so I'm looking forward to some large scale medieval fantasy undead vs. everyone all out war!!
  I definitely recommend it.
• DanceLikeAFoolRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The problem with accidentally stumbling upon new fics that pique my interest is that I binge them mercilessly. Took me about half an hour to get caught up. Sadfase.
  Non-traditional MC with little starter agency with a darker-themed cast being filled out. Seems tower/dungeon climber-esque with detail and follow-through. The battle system introduction feels intriguing but there hasn't been much of it. The obvious bad guys are obvious, and also huge POS's but hey. It's a little grimmer than I was expecting, but that's my fault. I mean, the cover was a skeleton. I'm a sucker for well-done necromancy. Easy follow decision. Keep up the good work author.
• CapefearRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  So far (as of chapter 3) this story feels pretty good. I will write a more in depth review when more comes out however keep doing what your doing Clowiac. Anyone looking for an interesting read and enjoy the "lost in time" feeling this is a pretty good option. 👍
• Nomad1791Royal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  good short teaser story. sucks that it hasnt been updated in a month guess its been dropped. what is here is interesting and well written though so not bad 10 min read.
• Wandering JoeRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Interesting start of the story in 7 currently posted chapters.
  The author uses an interesting premise of otherworldly conflicts in a strange setting of the seemingly strange tower where we don't see where it is exactly.
  I mean, the MC is sent through the contract with 2999 other humans while being forced to work by an interesting character of godly power. That plot Point was quite intriguing, as it involves other powerful beings, which are yet to be fully fleshed out, but nonetheless interesting at least.
  The MC, being a crippled boy in a wheelchair is a bold choice. I ain't argue about that in itself as the plot will probably revolve around the Necromancy, being his occupation.
  So far in 7 chapters, it did not bother me or made any significant changes to the story.
  Another point in the story is the situation of the MC and the Trainer, being a Lich, of... questionable origin with information scattered around the chapters. So far, nothing much crazy happened to him, as the politics seem not to be overly explained enough.
  It seems the story will revolve around classes, people, humans, and non-humans. Conflicts and dramas where every enslaved human has no choice but to obey the tower while being dragged by a trainer.
  His trainer is just another of many beings who are in charge of the humans who are reaching the further parts of the Tower. A place where the godly being is interested in. 3000 people were sent there, with possible other organizations being soon introduced? Who knows?
  Dialogue and style are good, and reading is fine in itself. Dialogues are made into sections where the someone speaking is in BOLD letters which do not bother me, I just have not read a novel that uses it like this. It is written well where it is clear who is speaking with intentions.
  Chess, being a part of the story, is fine as well. It will be used for the use of strength and explaining the plot points by the author, which is quite unique.
  MC's personality in it was an interesting start whe
• SoufdeboefRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  In one of the earlier chapters you said that the story has been slow paced until ch.5 and was going to pick up in pace after that.
  Back then, i already thought it was far too fast paced, let alone now.
  The reason why i'd like to read a pokémon novel is because i would like to experience the pokémon world in a realistic setting, and with realistic characters.
  But because the pace has been so fast. There hasn't been any opportunity to build the world or develop the characters. If you'd ask me to describe the personality of a character other than the main character, i would only be able to stick one word to the them like stern or strict, for the old lady and drill sergeant respectively.
  I don't know their views, opinions, thoughts, backstory, hell, i don't even really know how the places they work at looks. Is the school where the main character goes in the suburbs, or in the city? Is it a good or bad neighberhood? Perhaps you already told me, but there is a difference between telling and showing (aka describing).
  In one of your chapters your main characters was writing a test and got two questions that were ethical in nature. Instead of showing us the questions and the answers of the main character. Therefore building the world and showing us some of the main characters personality. You only told us that his answers were good.
  Long story short. Show us more of the world and personalities you have in mind when writing. Your writing style is quite neat so i'm sure you can pull it off.
  Good night,