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Information

Status

Hiatus

Author

Arzank

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• 0011Royal Road

  ★ 0.5

  The basic premise of this story is nice. A person from our world is reborn in the Star Wars universe as a mandalorian and later becomes Mandalor the Undying. But there are a lot pf problems with this story. First there are a huge number of spelling mistakes. Second the Author obviously doesn't know much about Star Wars cannon and it shows in the fact that he beleives that the Jedi don't know about the planet Illum and wouldn't visit in the many years the MC stays there. Third we really know nothing about the MC. The author always brushes over everything never fleshing out the MC's character or ambitions and the number of named characters we see or are even mentioned can be counted on one hand. Overall this really isn't a good story and I suggest that if the author wants to continue writing this that he should rewrite it and fix the abovementioned problems in the story.