Not another zombie apocalypse role playing game

Self-Published

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Description

Ji Aleksy wakes up in his stasis chamber. The room is dark, the floor is wet and filthy, this is unexpected.

After finding his bearings, waking up from his sluggish, depravated state, Ji browses what looks like a holographic screen.

This screen holds information about some of his statistics. And it includes an optional option, to turn on a narrator.

Ji travels with his antagonistic narrator, trying to find a way to cure his ailments. And in turn alleviate his sufferings.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: Nevatrue

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
Followers: 289
Views: 277,544

Chapters(56 total)

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Community Reviews(9)

First manga gamerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
You should really change the name of the novel
No getting enough views
BellwetherRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
In case you were worried it might be Friday, when I was writing this review, it wasn't.
The story has a fun 'Narrator', which describes the situation the protagonist gets into in a somewhat biased, yet amusing manner. It has some ideas stored - plot isn't always linear.
Overall, if you are looking for something with a bit of humour and adventure, I recommend giving this story a try.
SinikalRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
the author has a rare writing style that you don't see too often on RRL with an active narrator.
The plot is defined at least for the early story with the MC trying to cure his illness and adapt to the nwe world *though we'll have to wait to see if this is the grand plot or if something else is going to come out later since we're only 6 chapters in*.
grammar is good, not too much to say there. The common mistakes crop up occasionally *sentence splices/fragments, comma usage, auto-correct errors, etc. They aren't too common and I couldn't name anything that jumped out at me off of the top of my head. Though the author uses a unique system to denote speakers which occasionally leaves me confused if the MC is saying something or looking at something, though the narrator usually says what he is looking at so this could be me not adapting to this unique system. "Narrator" 'Other person' MC. Where it confuses me is when you get the MC speaking two back-back paragraphs with no dialogue denotations.
The characters are interesting though the selling point is the dialogue between the MC and his narrator.
FieryblueRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
It's a different outlook on stuff and is funny in a kind of detached way. Also the grammar is good which is a big plus in my book.
lithit0Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This novel is in simple terms ridicoulous, in more complex terms it is really ridicolous.
When reading this novel, it's best you try not to rationalize it, because it's entirely meant to be taken as a fun or comedic experience.
It has near impeccable grammar with few mistakes, the character's are okay, the story is okay (but then again it's not why you should be reading this novel) and if i were to be honset is think the style is where this story might suffer most. It has a unique format, that does what it what designed to do incredibly well, but takes some getting used to.
Then again, this novel can't be rated just with the above (why my aggregate was 4.5 even though the average of the above is ~4) it is the kind of novel that you pop a cold one to, but make sure you swallow befor reading or you mihgt just joke
*the writer of this review does not encourage getting drunk before reading this novel, he was merely making a point*
Overall i think it's a relatively fun exerience as long as you jst take the MC's actions in stride and don't ask too many questions
*never ask too many questions about things you enjoy or want to enjoy unless what you enjoy is science*
TekknosRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
i believe only showed the stats 2 times and that was not with numbers but just saying what they do, and not enough blue boxes -.5 stars. narrator is really a a$$ but some times good. -.5 stars. but good over all.
kay.lensonRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
yup nice story but if you are in game world where are the blue boxes...
pewpewcachooRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
For that it is, it's pretty neat. I enjoy the system narrator, it's one of the best parts of the story.
Blue boxes? Check.
Clueless MC? Check.
Decent writing and grammar? Check
Read it and don't drop it like I did because you have the attention span of a goldfish.
SavaneRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
I really liked the idea of the story and enjoyed the first few chapters, but i feel like there is a lot of wasted potential here, in the narration department mostly. It was like the author was in a rush to advance the story.
The MC is talking with a group of people, next paragraph he is somewhere else watching the horizon, next paragraph he is in another place talking with someone and so on, like he is teleporting around. We are never given a proper description of the surroundings nor are we given any real explanation of anything because the scenes are so rushed that no character has time to make any common sense questions.
I really hope this gets a rework