Norbert's Wacky Adventure

Self-Published

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Description

Norbert found himself miraculously or others would say to the detriment of their sanity surrounded by strangeness and mysticism.But the most burning question would be why, why he out of everyone is stuck in this position.Unexpectedly Norbert finds himself jumping back and forth between his world and Masanu trying to live to the next day and not seem totally insane to those around him. Or at least not insane as he feels.Let's start this journey together, and see where it takes us

Patreon:Stream of Consciousness

The schedule is a chapter a week on Monday :)

PS:Royal Road and the patreon linked above are the only places this story is published with the authors consent.If you can notify when it is placed elsewhere much appreciated.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Stream of Consciousness

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.6/ 5.0
Followers: 198
Views: 151,048

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★★★★ 3.5
Overall: I would say that it's a great story. There are flaws, but not too big ones. This is reccomendable for people who like other world stories with their own unique species of animals and rules. Especially if you don't like too much violence like other typical isekais.
Style:I really liked how you show your world through your words. It's precise, but sometimes it can be a little too much. The way you tell your scenery really helped me to visualise what is happening.
Story: I find your story a breath of fresh air. It's not violence centered, or at least based on what I read. It's mostly adventure (I mean it's literally stated in the title) the story really holds true to its purpose. I don't have much to complain here, but I'm still a bit confused on what is the main goal here.
Grammar: This is where I mostly found the problems. Especially on the punctuations and periods. The absence of some punctuations on the sentence often halts my reading immersion. This is often found in the descriptive scenarios. There are very few grammar errors aside from the punctuations and periods.
Character: I liked Norberts personality, he isn't that afraid to try out things, but I feel like the side characters can do more working. As they usually just leave lines and go on about.