Noontide Mess [Comic Script]
Self-Published
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Description
Two men have a showdown in the middle of Tucson, Arizona Territory.
Originally finished October 5, 2024.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2024
- Author
- RoxyRobyn
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 263
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- highdesolateRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0A very solid intro for a western. I always love the vibe of em, so its fun to see. Are you planning on continuing this one, or did you just do this for fun as writing practice?
I need to add more words, so, is Josh short for Joshua, or is Josh too uncultured for a longer name? However if Josh is short for Joshua, why is William not called Bill? These are the real questions. (You can ignore these). - RznRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5This is a good outline for a comic script, though it could use some work in depicting the form of the panels. The story elements are interesting and it is possible to understand how a mock up or the actual comic could be produced from this. The title of noontide is a bit difficult to understand and I suppose that is why the author note was needed.