Noodle Knight

Self-Published

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Excerpt:“Huh? What? Sorry, I was busy enjoying these wonderful noodles over here. Would you like a bowl? No, sorry. What were you saying?”“As I was saying, the heroes here shall be under your care so that they may get accustomed to our world and combat in preparation for The Great Serving time.”Still distracted by my noodles, I reply idly.“Yes your majesty…” Wait, did I just agree to babysit these guys?================================================================A/N: Nothing serious at all as I'm writing for fun. Perhaps you'll like my humor.Update 6/4/16 - Duel in progress with BeeBaBoop.Chapters written: 2 of 3*Disclaimer* Rated Teen for wordplay.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2016
Author
j0nn0

Tags

FANTASYADVENTURECOMEDYSLICE OF LIFE

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Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
58
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39,839

Chapters(14 total)

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Community Reviews(7)

  • SintressRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This was a very light heart-ed and humorous adventure. My only real complaint is that the chapters are so short. Granted that is not much of a complaint. Very well thought out and his use of innuendo was innocent yet misleading.
    Over all I recommend it and hope he keeps it up.
  • Shadow_Eater21Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Many stories on Royal Road start out with a tragedy to the main protagonist. Not that I am complaining( even my own fiction started out with a tragedy.......hehehe..... :P)
    But it is highly refreshing to read this novel amongst all the others.
    Style: 4/5
    It is easy to understand . Has many sentences with double meanings. Very Humorous and light hearted read.
    I personally like this style of writing, though it may not be the best(i have read crap ton of books so my expectations involve stuff like Da Vinci Code or The Godfather but meh...) it is still better than most.
    Stroy: 4/5
    An expected cliche: start of the story with a grand prophecy of a disaster, then MC comes and saves the day....... Or is it?
    While there no problem writing on a cliche there should be something to be added on top of it. Like j0nn0's special sauce(that came out wrong..........).
    His story adds quite a lot on the cliche setting that you forget it is a cliche setting.
    Grammar: 4/5
    No Comments...........
    I feel anything I say in this department will make me a hypocrite.
    j0nn0 senpai! Keep up the good work!
    There that is better.
    Character: 5/5
    Few of the best characters I have read in this site.
    "Throw Logic out of the window" -Sam(Never ever forget these words)
    Also you will love the main MC Bob. You must read to love him.
    All of the characters in this story are lovable idiots.(In Bob's case an actual food idiot...... or is he......)
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    Overall it is a very good read, and a must recommend to all. Also his art sense is divine. Even Leonado da Vinci will faint in front of his art skills.
    Though it is earlier than promised j0nn0, but hey you have 10 threads in here..... so close enough..
  • TaoBioRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    A short and fun read with good grammar and reads well, with the shadow plot I can see it having a more serious plot line and I hope the author picks it back up with either the same lighthearted tone or a slightly more serious story.
  • donkeymonsterzRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    (As of chapter 5)
    The beginning of this has been very lighthearted and I’ve been enjoying the comedy included.
    Due to it being very early for this fiction, it is hard to tell where this is progressing, so I’m putting some trust in the author to…cook... up some plot.
    Seriously though, I’m starting to think we need a cooking category for this fiction.
    After a bit more character development beyond, he can cook and loves food, this fiction will be great!
    Keep it up.
  • ZanderkoalaRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Style: The style is first person without much flair. Tried and true. Nothing fancy but nothing original either in this regard.
    Story: The story is enjoyable and, while set with a common theme, is given a rather uncommon setting. It's fun, plain and simple.
    Grammar: There are few mistakes and the overall writing is easy enough to follow. It could benefit from some baseline editing and rewording, but overall it's well done.
    Character: This is where the story shines. The characters are fun. There isn't enough of the work yet to see if this trend will continue, but I certainly hope it does.
  • librarysmilesRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Delicious silly story about the pursuit of food being more important than the isekai story in the background.
    Love how the protagonist, Bob, is willing to jump wholeheartedly towards both eating and making delicious food even if that means being the most powerful person ever in order to accomplish the achievement of consuming the best food possible!,
    I'm grateful for the tasty treat. Time to make some pasta! ;)
  • Bob15Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    i am really enjoying reading this! thanks for writing this story and keep up the good work!!!