No Respawn

Self-Published

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Description

Rewrite of the No Respawn here:https://royalroadl.com/fiction/15941/no-respawn-patch-20

And God said: "Let there be light!"*DING!*and there was a blue screen...So God changed the world and screwed everyone living on it.Let the game begin!Oh.. and don't die. There is no respawn.

French Translation by Yusuke_Takumi/takutrad:https://tradudimanche.wordpress.com/

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: jmlikestorock009

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 1,962
Views: 986,210

Chapters(42 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

xsyptosRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Keep them coming you have a great start!! Make that one girl up her luck sometime. lol 4 luck is bad.
SovereignofAshesRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Imagine for a moment, if Hunter S. Thompson did a gonzo version of a LitRPG story. Set in the real world, with believable characters, playing off of LitRPG tropes and completely turning them on their head. That is what jmlikestorock009 has created with this story. A completely self-aware, unique take on the genre that has the potential to follow streams of consciousness to wherever the author wants to take us.
The author transplants us directly into the grey-meat-space of the main character and here we are bouncing around with all of his myriad thoughts on everything from his personal insecurities to his sarcastic sense of humor. We get to see the story through his eyes, experience what he experiences, and are well-anchored in the events that are blowing by us at break-neck pace. You feel genuinely attached to the characters in this story. You laugh when they joke around, you feel for the main character and any of his short-comings.
The 'game system' is straightforward and unobtrusive. The author uses it as much to move the plot forward as he does to keep the world in line. You won't have to memorize a lot of strange lingo, and a lot of hidden gems are dashed throughout the game system itself.
The author strives to keep themselves up-to-date on revisions. They have a solid foundation with what they want to communicate with the story and although there are a few little grammatical issues here and there, they are easy to fix with a quick revision. None of them pull away from the story at all. If anything, the tone of the work seems to characterize any grammatical issues and show them off as character elements.
The author has a great sense of pacing and once you start reading it will be hard to put this fiction down until you either finish it or get caught up to where the author has left us. Great transitions between scenes, dialogue and the almighty game system in the background. Well worth the read and the investment. If you haven't read this story yet, what the hell
ThjaziRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Thanks for the awesome read.
I enjoyed the gritty style, multiple PoVs, lack of actual harems, realistic women, and lack of NTR. You also didn't graphically describe the rape or sex. Your world building was great. Good mix of action and downtime. Though the characters were believable and loved that they have misunderstood each other.
Grammar decent. Small typos didn't distract me. Unique style choices worked. Great use of blue boxes.
Currently on hiatus? 4 months
TreyonRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This should be one of the very few if any novels with a fatty dude and based on the description of him i can find a resemblance with me because i am similar to your protagonist so i found it extremely funny, exciting and weird at the same time....... its like you put me in there but changed my name and my family.... my guess is that miguel is around 110-120 kg so he has to lose around 50 kg of weight and its in the background but he is getting less fatter as he moves... And to tell the truth i was expecting him to leave some stone walls with messages for his party that he knows will follow him such as telling them why he left and what not.
The style its good, we get to see some POVS of the party once in a while and it helps add different views to things
The story... while there are a lot of similar ones lately due to its popularity you can say that it stands out on on his own and while the principal concetp of real life RPG its not new, the way that you advance with the story its good.
Grammar... well i enjoyed the story way to much and had to read all available chapters in one go (25 at the time of this review) and it was already 6 AM by the time i finished.... so i didnt really noticed or remember any mistakes since i wasnt paying attention to that LOL...
Now the characters.... what can i say? i find them all to be life like... and the character grow of the cast its going really well, at least in my opinion. Miguel is getting confidence in his own persona in social terms while getting OP too, claire his nemesis in more than one way is overcoming her not so bad past really and its getting stronger. Eric is being more true to his own personality and starting to overcome his fears of conflict and pain, Melissa... i think that you need to improve her character better and haver her participate more, she is part of the main group but she appears to be more like background than anything else.
Lastly Dianne.... it was quite the twist there, i absolutely didnt expected TH
alfamatRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
very good.
LagerlkRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Very enjoyable have really been enjoying the story so far keep up the good work.
EpicKiller11Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
i really enjoy these stories if you keep going i'll appreciate it if you know what i mean also the character you described acts like me but not fat also slightly muscular so i can relate better to the character
RoarRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I like our story so far, just an observation, at this time the main character is now has access to both gods systems. If this is the case then it opens up several possibilities in your story that could e explored. Anyway, I am just writing to say there is a lot of potential in this story and to say keep up the good work,( it may not perfect or grammatically correct but then who is.)
Hacked AnonnymusRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
Arc 2... or season 2 or however you want to call it, I found it very rushed and lacked of ALOT of details, some shit didnt make sence and thoughts from Mc are VASTLY DIFFERENT from his actions (though its his personality I guess so doesnt matter to much)
Also most side character say how good is the Mc, a genius and alot of good shit while he make alot of dumb (I admit in combat he is a genius) desicions as looking for his family in a place highly dangerous and if they were alive they probably already left dat area and went to a military zone that is much more safely than the forest/dungeon.
So... good until arc 2 :D (personal opinion just read it and decide if u like it or not :v)
AdirellRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
The storyline is pretty mediocre, not used in all its potential. MC is fairly interesting, although nor completly likeable, however other characters are just horrible. They give an impression of lack of cohesion. For example they claim to 'love' someone and yet they treat them awfuly. They all act purely selfishly without any regards to their 'friends'. Reading about their hipocrysy, childishness and lack of basic decency is just unpleasent. The story could really use at least one steadfast and mature character.
It's not really bad story. It's good when youre bored and don't have something better to read.