New Quest: Survive!

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Description

When Elliot Kane wakes up in a dark, labyrinthine dungeon with no memory of how he got there, his only clue is a cryptic message on a retro PDA and a never-ending supply of caramel popcorn. Trapped in a dangerous world of bioluminescent fungi, humanoid cockroach soldiers, and mysterious safe havens, Elliot must adapt quickly to survive. Armed with nothing but his two hands and half remembered boxing lessons, Elliot must navigate a twisted world that seems bent on testing his every limit.

In this strange place, survival isn’t just about strength—it’s about adapting, enduring, and finding a way out.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: BrandNewMoon

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.5/ 5.0
Followers: 2
Views: 1,626

Chapters(9 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

elderblueRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Although it's very early on to do a propper review of everything, after reading the first 6 chapters I think it's time to leave an early review.
Style: Although the writing can be a tad sloppy at times, I kinda like it, it's a endearing in a way.
Story: Seems a bit generic, but in a good way, like it's a safe read. Although I'm pretty sure I'm reading someone's own version of Dungeon Crawler Carl, I really do want to know what happens to Elliot and Sam, like, the setting seems similar, but it's distinct enough to this point that its enjoyable. Fights have been the highlights of some of the chapters... although they can be a bit chaotic at times.
Grammar: Probably the story's weakest point, but it seems English is not the writer's first language so it's passable.
Character: I like Elliot, he is a fun character to read, he comes off a bit too sarcastic at times, but I like him anyways. He might not be the deepest or most rounded character ever, but he is fun to read. I'm interested to know how the dynamics are going to change now that the Girlfriend is entering the party.