new life +
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Description
When life throws Craven a curve ball and the words flash before him new life + he is given choices but also random chances for other things what will happen in his life now.
inner monologue
"speaking"
*actions*
Sorry guys this is my first time writing if im doing something wrong let me know and ill try and fix it.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- Crystal Jade Harding
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 37
- Views
- 10,149
Chapters(12 total)
- Growing painsMar 5, 2020
- the truthMar 30, 2019
- the problem with being smart is boredomMar 22, 2019
- Emilia's side storyMar 18, 2019
- start of classesMar 17, 2019
- waking with friends and good morning sister?Mar 16, 2019
- fun in the dormsMar 15, 2019
- school lifeMar 15, 2019
- time skip my life at six years oldMar 15, 2019
- learning new things about myself and the worldMar 14, 2019
- rebirth in unusual circumstancesMar 14, 2019
- odd choices random chance what does this mean?Mar 12, 2019
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Community Reviews(1)
- Andrew MeyersRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0This review is as of chapter 10 (the problem with being smart is boredom).
The chapters bring a smile to my face with the innocence and happiness the main characters exude. I'm eagerly awaiting each new chapter to see how Silvia deals with her new life. I hope the author continues with this fiction to a natural conclusion. It seems to hold a lot of potential for interesting character development and engaging story arcs.
Style: The story is delivered in a multi-POV style where each character may provide inner monologues or speech at any point in the scene. It does take a bit getting used to, but after adapting to it you can see the benefits well enough.
Story: Good worldbuilding, plenty of possible plot and side-plot developments.
Grammar: Punctuation is lacking in some areas in earlier chapters, making it a bit hard to read at times. However, it seems to be getting progressively better over time.
Characters: This early in the plot there hasn't been much room for characters to be fleshed out yet. As of chapter 10, the main characters seem a bit brainwashed or childishly simple - yet, that should be expected for a group of children. We'll have to see how it develops as the story continues.