New chance in fantasy

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2024

Author

Mickids

• Story taken down, here's why
  May 6, 2024

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• killersvabRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Passive Skill Unlocked: Minor Patience
  Effect: Patience increased by 5 months
  Description: Ability to wait a period of time without any withdrawal symptoms due to lack of chapters
  Symptoms Negated but Not Limited To:
  -Crying in a corner
  -Sudden anger
  -Going limp while spanking the monkey
  -Thinking about life choices
  -Wondering what it's like to have a girlfriend
  -Realizing your empty wallet is safe because you don't have a girlfriend
  -Outside life
  -Reading fanfiction to fill the void
  Etc.
• EleventhRelicRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Whilst the general theme of this tale has been done before many times, there is a freshness to Max that draws you into the story.
  The first couple of chapters are i abiet cliche and done before, but as it progresses and max is joined by Lin-lin, Octavia and Binvo it grows in richness and potential.
  Whilst english is not the authors first language it is not hurt by this in the slightest, i wish i could write a second tongue so well!
  Heartly recommend!
• Hanlock5Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  My only issue with this novel is that it feels a little slow paced in the beginning, but that has allowed some character development that lacks a bit in other stories. So while it's feels a bit slow, it's as fast as it needs to be. And the story does pick up the pace a bit further in.
• IonicMrWizardRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Granted, I am biased and love OP stories, but despite a proofreader being needed, the author has created quite an amazing world that follows a reincarnation-LitRPG story.  Up to chapter 2 is him getting out of the first dungeon, meeting some interesting characters (panda girl!) and discovering that he is not invincible.
• TheGreatOneRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The grammar is actual trash and should probably be fixed to rake in more readers to actually continue reading the story.
  That said, the grammar wasn't that much of a problem for me because the story was way too hooking and awesome. It may well be the best OP MC story I have ever read.
  The writing style gets awkward sometimes, hence the half star off, but generally the story is well-written and easy to read(if you ignore the grammar of course).
  The MC is one of the most relatable MCs I have ever read about, but I took a half star off because most of the other characters could be more fleshed out.
  Also, the insanely sadisticly crazily humungusaurusly gigantically long chapters are an added bonus. You could expect to take many a hour reading this, and enjoy every one of it.
• luis5224Royal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  For his status, instead of describing it you should show it in one of those blue screens like in many RR rpg novels. New skills as well.
• anuzanRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Super interesting story. Great characters with a good level of development. Can't wait for the next chapter. Though it would be beneficial to have a Proficient english speaker to proofread and fix the grammer.
• mioRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  super de voir un autre belge ici! bon courage! bonne histoire! j'continue en englais :)
  so, continuing in english, i like you story, it's a great read, and your characters are fun.
  but, as with all good things, there are a few problems. namely, your grammar: you take a lot of french words and change them to make them seem english, some obvious, some not so much... this is normal, and you probably do so subconsiously.
  an example of a really subtle one is your use of gentle. you use it to mean "gentil" i think, no?
  but gentle is not really the same in english. gentil would translate to kind.
  gentle is more like the word "doux" meaning soft in your actions. so when you say he is gentle it's ok. but when you say "he is gentle with me/her/him" it sounds weird in english. it should be "he is kind with me", or "he treats me gently"
  there are others, and i will add them with new chapters, because for now i forgot them, too absorbed in the story (i read all chapters in one go, so sue me) so you can fix them, and learn from your mistakes, as max would say.
  either way, i'll be sure to follow your story!
• TinyBookDragonRoyal Road

  ★ 1.0

  I really tried to power through hoping it would get better. Only made it to chapter 16. My soul died around then due to the atrocious grammar and story.
• Handsome RansomRoyal Road

  ★ 1.0

  This story has sooo much potential and the writing is good with only a few mistakes such as mispelling "though" as "thought".
  The style is good but the characters are absolutely garbage.
  You are forcing the characters WAY too much.  A character tries to kill him, he helps recharge her treasure which he is one of the only few in world that can recharge(he also might have died if his energy didn't recharge fast enough).  Next character that would have killed him if he was weaker he says he likes after knowing her about 2hours and all of a sudden knows her entire personality.  Then after she fails to kill him he gifts her high quality armour and fixes and improves her sword.  After that the chick swears her life to him...
  All of this in 15 chapters with some of them he does other stuff. Ie only interacts with these two for like 2 chapters each.
  Basically you have just rushed this too much and characters all have major mood swings.  Also a soldier abandons his princess in a dangerous area doesn't match storyline.