Neo-Tokeyo 199X: M1

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Description

In the spring of 199x, Arron Wynterz traveled to the Megacity Neo-Tokeyo for a new job opportunity, so that he can send money back to his parents to keep the family farm running.

The new Megacity is the capital of Nippon and was born after the many disastrous decades known as the [Troubles].

Built with both the latest technology and bold Ideas, It soon became the pride of the [Party of Mother and Father] and an example for all member states of the World Humanitarian Organization [WHO].

High tech. High wages. High crime.

Join Arron Wynterz as he travels from his small country town to the Megacity and navigates his many encounters with the [Party of Mother and Father], the [Office of Reason], underground criminal organizations, and possibly even separatists.

Everything is great or is it?

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Ser JS

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Rating: 4.6/ 5.0
Followers: 36
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Community Reviews(2)

NeslonRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I had tons of fun reading this. The author actually says down and thought about what could create a dystopian system and what keeps a fascist regime running. Heck he might have even done real research. Admitably the bar is low here on RR but this world feels real and the motivations of all the characters make sense. We don't need the author to play god be cause the characters tell the story without his meddling. Super fun to read easy to get immersed. Give it a try y'all.
NavieRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Hear me out: Picking it up after stumbling on it you might be feeling that it's not worth the read but I beg to differ,
pace:It's a slow read from chapter 1 to about 17 I get the notion that the author took his time building the setting and world because they do play a major impact.
Story: From Chapter 1 to 17 I felt like was just floating along with the Mc as he's playing catch with the word(Read to find out what that means) But by chapter 18 I had a good picture of where and how the Mc might develop.
Character: He's not Special right now, but he's not not special, He has his elements where he shines but it's an average Joe shine and not a God of War and Tech right out the gate and with these Sifi stories you run into that more often than not. Progression is the name of the game with this story the way I see it and that goes for the world setting too I get the feeling (Mother and Father: Read to find out what I'm referring too) are not the end all and be all which makes for an interesting branch off down the line because just like anything the world is a big place.
Issue: I don't think this is a big one but Hear me out, I big issue lots of authors run into when making a Mc regular in the beginning is not developing a proper Driving emotion for the main character so we as the reader can connect and feel for the person we are reading about, This Mc lacks that to a point He has drive but it's not strong to the point where he would wreak havoc over it, So here my prediction: The Mc is going to have a Baptism of blood to turn him into someone that can properly handle the world he has signed on with( Read to understand what I'm Talking about)..
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