Naruto: THE GAME OF GODS

Self-Published

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Description

It is one of my first novel so I hope you can ignore some mistakes and you may have a good experience while reading the novel.

In this story The MC Adi will be reborn into the world of Naruto and he is not alone. He will be accompanied by Our lovely humans of earth and yes they will have their respective wishes. So just sit back and enjoy how our MC will come out the situation and win this world competition

Also in my story every reborn character will be under one condition and that is they can't interfere in the predefined plot of the Naruto world either directly or indirectly and if they did they will have to face the consequence. And the consequence can be much worse than dying.

SO ENJOY!!!!

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2023
Author
Bholenath12345

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICSUPERNATURALMARTIAL ARTSMALE LEADMYSTERYREINCARNATION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
2.3/ 5.0
Followers
13
Views
6,972

Chapters(17 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • RaileksRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    I got to chapter 9 and just can't continue. This story commits that common crime of telling, not showing.  Especially in the intros, which introduces a great many things(poorly) that quickly become irrelevant. I say intros because the author quickly rushes you from past life to the afterlife to naruto with blurbs of info about each that are not relevant to the immediate story, tell to much about things the character or reader doesn't need to know, or assumes some opinion/fact as absolute truth without explaining it. This is done both from the narrator's and characters' perspectives and the constant switch between 3rd and 1st person with no rhyme or reason is jarring.  The author acknowledges the start was a bit of an info diatribe and that it's over but it very much does not end.  The only thing that changes is there is more dialogue.  There is a lot more wrong here from the characters to the way the story assumes knowledge of the reader(somehow not telling you things you DO need to know despite the info drop) but i don't have time to dissect it all.  The overall idea is the only thing interesting about this but it is not well executed.