Naruto: Subject #37

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'Where... am I...?'

He awoke, surrounded by an overwhelming green that enveloped his body, with no memories as to how he got there or where he was. The boy twisted and writhed his body with spasms as he tried to escape but none came to his aid.

Our hero lay blind; a sitting duck to a snake-like man who watched his actions with a mysterious smile, his reptilian eyes turning into crescents watching the show.

"Kukuku..."-----Born with a busted heart, bedbound and attached to beeping machinery, that was his life for 17 long years.

Regardless of his situation he never once cursed his fate or lamented his luck, there were too many things he gained alongside what he lost, caring parents, a large bank account and enough books to give any librarian a headache; that was until those gains too were lost to the wind.

Or rather, he was lost to them.

Watch as our hero explores what it's like to be truly alive... after death.----[A/N: This is a realistic transmigration that is slow at the start to build a strong bases and ramps up in speed later! I hope you all enjoy reading :)]

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: _Wint3r_

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Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 317
Views: 181,259

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Community Reviews(9)

bchammerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I've read a fair amount of Naruto SI fanfics, and this one has made me the most excited for what comes next compared to other ones I've read so far. The author clearly put thought into his main character, the ways he'll interact with both canon and non-canon characters, how the power system will work, and he's made some interesting choices for unique abilities Aoki has. I like all the different perspectives he uses, its nice to see Aoki have a mix of the seriousness the bloody world of Naruto deserves, and also his own quirks and childness that show up in lighter moments. More than all of that, I like that Aoki's motivations feel way less arbitrary(get strong, grind, etc.) than the mc has in usual naruto fanfics, and that his relationships with characters will affect his decisions and goals. Looking forward to lots more!
P.S. Author you mentioned that you are planning for this story to run less than a thousand chapters, but is that like, a lot less? I wouldn't mind if things went slow and you went for a casual 990 or so :). Words Words Words Words Words, I guess I cant really ask you to write more when I'm struggling for 200 words here.
Zer0ResistenceRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story i great!
The bulk of the fic is through the perspective of the MC, a nuanced and interesting character that manages to be likable and interesting. There are moments where the fic jumps to another characters viewpoint, which provides a really helpful dose of perspective of the world and how the MC looks to in-universe natives.
The Naruto characters are well portrayed in this fic. They aren't the one dimensional caricatures they often become in other Naruto fanfiction.
I really look forward to see how this fic progresses.
AzmodeussRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Binge read all chapters. Writing style is good and didn't see any grammar mistakes. Pov changes to characters mc interacts with and gives their .. well pov.
Mc is op but not so op that he would destroy other nations as 6 year old but like he'd be stronger than edo tensei madara when he reaches his peak, probably more.. but we aren't far in the story yet to know for certain.
Mc's body has:
Hashirama's cells, Tobirama's cells giving him his red eyes and an unknown Kekkei Genkai
Other characters seem intelligent like
Mc trying to emotionally manipulate hiruzen as a child but hiruzen is aware of what he is doing but acts along.
Good fic with regular updates ...
Now read and review so author gets motivated and doesn't drop 🤞
DreadstoneRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Enjoying this story. The mc is likable. Not immediately op and isn't arrogant like some isekai naruto mcs are in other stories. The tone of the point of view is well written in my opinion.
Looking forward to see what sort of abilities this mc has. Having him be a research subject or orochimaru was cool. Always felt like yamato/kinoe was underutilized in naruto. Will be interesting to see if mc has any interactions with Yamato and how Yamato will view him as a fellow test subject.
EdwinJRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Very good engaging fan fiction. It feels very good, all introduced characters are very memorable and their interactions are interesting. Also, so far, although the story has been quite slow, lots of things are happening. The author also chooses to focus the main characters power in otherwise quite underutilised archetypes in naruto fanfics(at least so far), which is a plus for me as long as it's well written, this being such a case.
Every fanfic reader should give this one a try, it's very good.
INDOMINUSRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
from the 19 chapters that have been released as of the writing of this review i am happy to say that i like this story alot, not only does is it bring something diffrent to the common trope of naruto Fan-fics, it is very well articulated and has to my understanding of the english language good verbage and grammar which is a big plus. I cant wait for more of this book to be published for within these 19 chapters that have been released i have been ensnared by its writing
RedPanda87Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Solid novel. Great prose. Great story. Great MC. Great style of writing(recently changed, a change I hope he'll keep) . If you love Naruto, you're gonna love this novel. That said, the story seems just a tad bit idealistic, in the sense that even if the MC doesn't have everything under his control. There aren't many things out of his control either. Anything that is, is something that he can handle. Regardless, fantastic story, I hope all of you will give it a try. Think of it like imagining yourself as the MC in the Naruto world, you'd try everything to give yourself more power wouldn't you? Something similar. DOESN'T mean our MC doesn't run into unexpected troubles, he does, and I'm very glad he does. Gives the story a great sense of depth while giving insights into Character and character development. Like I said, Solid
DeikonRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
If you are enjoying Naruto or have enjoyed the show?
This is a particularly good fanfic so far of the show. I think I've read up to chapter 20?
And I really like the alternate points of view as well as the MC so far.
I'm really looking forward to what the author does with this, I am usually inclined to Golden finger or litrpg / system type stories.
Once in a while I take a look at fanfics and this one is pretty good. I recommend it highly.
VxentroniumRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This is good if you enjoy naturo fan fiction! The author has a style that makes the characters seem intelligent and rational, which is appreciated. Things can get silly at times with internal monologue but that’s okay.
The author obviously has plans for where the story will go, and I hope they keep writing to continue expanding on the strong foundation.