Naruto: Mixed Heritage

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Synopsis:

Ethan A Computer Science student transmigrates into the body of an orphan named Renjiro in Naruto. He soon realizes that the orphan has Uchiha and Uzumaki Bloodlines. Join Renjiro in his journey as he grows and his quest to become the strongest shinobi!

Warning :1. The MC's power would be gained via hard work and training over years (sorry if you want an overpowered MC from the get-go)2. No harem (there might be some romance but don't get your hopes high)3. There will be a lot of killing (maybe gore too, not sure if I can do gore right though)What to expect :1. Lots of training2. A lot of original arcs.3. The plot will mostly stay the same (at least till Shippuden), but I won't repeat any scenes/dialogues that took place in the manga (as I'm assuming you've already read it).Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or its characters (except the original characters I create)

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: SideCharacter51

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Rating: 4.2/ 5.0
Followers: 115
Views: 42,871

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Community Reviews(3)

DreadstoneRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
So far a really well written fanfiction. Enjoying the story and character point of view so far. Really like the idea of an Uzumaki/Uchiha mixed clan character. The time period is interesting with lots of story potential without immediately getting the MC bogged down in the main canon storyline. So lots of room for the MC to grow.
MC is not an OP genius right out of the gate which i like. As far as I've read the MC seems to be working for their gains. The system so far had been very light and mostly seems to be a good way to keep track of the MC's abilities rather than a source of power.
RauanAiramRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It's very good , I read in fanfic site, repeat It's perfect naruto fanfic.everything is well crafted with a good background as well as excellent development, it is not forced or even strange. All situations are a very possible reality, in short, it is perfect without a doubt. Sometimes it seems a little slow or doesn't diminish the story at all, if I were to point out a problem it would be the fact that there aren't many chapters.
BingleRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Things in this story just kinda happen. There’s no inter character relationships. I know next to nothing about the main characters team. They don’t interact. They train together for months and I think they talk to each other once or twice.
I was really taken out of the story a few times with random breaks to explain how the authors world is slightly different from the manga or how the author thinks something fits where there’s gaps in the original work’s setting. Explanations like that ruin the flow and are totally unnecessary.
My last gripe is that we never really get a moment to relax. The story never really dwells on anything. The character thinks to himself at one point. I’m a murderer and a child soldier. And then the next scene they’re in the next town and then they’re back in the leaf village a paragraph later. No elaboration no conversation with his team mates. Just poof to their objective and poof back.
I’m 40 something chapters in and it’s not terrible it just needs to slow down a little and move the mid chapter author notes to the end of the chapter.